• Member Since 12th Aug, 2012
  • offline last seen Mar 17th, 2019

Zepharel


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Don't stop this... I am intrigued.

Don't disappoint me.:twilightsmile:

I am hooked as well please continue fellow geek:pinkiehappy:

It's Bartholomew!

Good stuff man.

Intriguing, I shall follow this and see where it goes.:trixieshiftright:

Hooray! Finally another Dark Souls and My Little Pony Crossover! :pinkiehappy:

MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOREE:flutterrage:

Thank you all for the comments and favorites!
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I most certainly plan on continuing this story. Already I have started writing the second chapter. I think it will be just as long as the first, if not longer.
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thanks for the fave!
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Thanks for the follow. Hope the story will exceed your expectations.
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Happy to see fellow Dark Souls enthusiasts here! Hopefully this will grow to be an awesome story.

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Please tell me the guy's name is Bartholomew....
Tell me your favourite setup for maximum destruction?

1243187 What system do you play dark souls on

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You know I never really considered that? we'll have to see what the future holds as far as real names go.:twilightsmile: As for my build,
My character wears the black knight armor and gauntlets and the crimson waist-cloth and mask of the sealer, all fully upgraded. As for weapons, I usually use the silver knight sword since its really the strongest one handed weapon that can carry an enchantment and the gravelords greatsword. For hitting from a distance, I use the darkmoon bow and dragonslayer greatbow. As for miracles I use a few wrath of the gods, great lightning spear and sunlight blade. Pyromancies I use fire tempest and great fireball. I don't use sorcery so none of those. I usually play with a friend who excels with sorcery so, with him we have all bases covered.
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I play on the ps3. I beat Demon's Souls on it, so I figured I might as well continue the tradition
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Umbasa!:raritywink:

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Well tell me when you decide on the name

It's been so long since I've played Dark Souls (XBOX 360 for me) so not much I can remember. But then again it all depends on what I feel like using.

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I know what you mean. Haven't played it in awhile myself. Holding off until the dlc comes out. Really psyched for it!:pinkiehappy:

1248271 yay for dark souls on ps3 i havnt beat it yet kinda screwed up the lvling on my main tried to make him a jack of all trades on his first play through didnt work out quite like i wanted it to but i digress yay dark souls

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my jack of all trades worked out perfectly although pvp was still hard due to lag

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dlc is out for pc but i understand what you mean. Yay artorias dlc

Hmm so far so good.
There is no need for you to rush the story like you said.

Pick a tense and stick to it, please.:twilightsmile:

This needs heavy editing.

Not bad so far though.

I like it!
MOAR!
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Moar!!!!:flutterrage: ....please:fluttercry: that was a good chapter though

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Thanks for letting me know about that. Guess I got a little too wrapped up in writing the story and submitting it, I forgot to edit it. Its a little embarrassing. Its been edited now, so it should be better. Let me know if anything else is out of order.
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Gad you both are enjoying it so far!

Hehehehehe nice Smoughs reference. Tenderized by his hammer. :pinkiecrazy:

Funny as hell that he ignored his stomach for a thousand years, I bet as soon as he starts to eat he gets interrupted. :pinkiesmile:

MOAR!!!!!!!!!!:flutterrage:

Still a few errors, Ctrl+F for "is" and "hears."

Love it so far.

more more more more more

Keep it up, however I hope you don't make him TOO friendly with the ponies...

You need to indent every time you make new paragraph, but otherwise this is great.

Again please indent the paragraphs, but just like before great chapter.
Also what is his armor and weapons? :rainbowhuh:

Well I dont know much about Dark Souls, But this crossover seems pretty badass, hope you keep the awesome coming.

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yeah, I thought of how much that happened to me and I just had to put it in :pinkiecrazy:
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I'm glad you do. This is uncharted territory for me so I hope I am keeping to the characters personality well enough.
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Too friendly? He's not going to be dancing around and singing Kumbaya if that's what you mean:raritywink:
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Indenting on the way. As for his armor and weapons, you'll be finding out next chapter.
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More is on the way!
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I am honored that you like my story despite not knowing the world of Dark Souls. If you enjoy a challenging game and have time to spare, you should look into it. If not and you feel lost at some points, try http://darksoulswiki.wikispaces.com/ . Its about as close as you can get to understanding the game without having to play it. Hope you continue to enjoy the story!

you cant kill the dark lord he has been through things that would kill well anything else

Hmmm, interesting... However I hope the next update comes soon, lest I lose interest and have to reread the story when it does.
This story has a lot of potential.

I am pretty sure everyone will think he captured Sweetie Belle and Apple Bloom :rainbowlaugh:

How would the dark wood ring work in a more realistic setting? I suppose it would just be decorative, I play a lot of dark souls and this thought just popped into my head. Also, a little information on what the guy is wearing would help others to understand, as of this moment all we know about how the guy looks is that he is wearing heavy armor, has a sword, and has a shield, it makes him rather vague and bland as a character. Other than that, I like it.

Never actually played the game myself, but I've seen other play it. Pretty good so far. :twilightsmile:

Why does Chicken have to be a little shit?

Could use more character description. It's kinda hard to determine and depict certain scenes without a description of the main character.
Anyways, good job!
I give this 5/5 Sunlight Medals. :moustache:

So far, so good, keep it up!:pinkiehappy:

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