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Of to a promising start
I love it! Keep up the great work and hope more come soon!
Promising start. My only confusing is to why there were 200 hunters on this mission?
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I mean, it's a Wendigo... 200 should be the normal when capturing something that can rip you in half in less than a second.
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Indeed
Here's a funny thing, Apparently the Nuckelavee doesn't like fresh water.
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Oddly enough, I learned that from the SCP wiki.
Nice work here and looking forward to seeing the hunt for this beast and wonder who that was at the end. And looking forward to seeing if more breaking innocent and ignorant minds and point of views comes in
Hi, I'm actually come back to read and respond to this. And sad to say, I don't like where this is going. And it seems like our "protagonist" is getting worse and worse.
Even threatening to kill a child!? The f*** is wrong is with you!? Plus, you can't just threatened to kill a element of harmony WITHOUT consequences! Do you want to make a enemy out of everypony?
I won't be surprised IF Celestia or Luna hears of this, and come by to PUNCH/BLAST your silly dumbass to the ground for that.
Please, stop acting like a heartless bastard like a terrible and bad representation of Geralt.
Look, I actually like edgy characters. BUT, even I have limits and standards on this "toxic edginess" going on. Especially the "I want to die" bullcrap you keep sprouting about. Despite being a frickin kid/pre-teen in this.
Do you make this character secretly have terrible parents, bullied, or a bad childhood? Because, it doesn't seem like it from the prologue.
You don't have to be the "worst evil" to fight the real monsters? That's just total bullcrap. Monster Hunters are f****** heroes in there own right, and brave professionals to killing the evil monsters and save the day. ( Unless the "monsters" themselves are actually misunderstood, and innocent. Than that's a different story. )
Just don't give out that bullcrap of "the monster of monsters" edginess. Even Geralt who is a bit similar, is more mature and "humble" than you.
If I take your "logic", you be no better than the real monsters, and just kill all the ponies already. Because that's what the "worst evil" do. Otherwise, you're a lying hypocrite.
Plus, you need to call 988 Lifeline, because you're frickin TEN YEARS OLD for some reason, and is acting like this?
Sorry author, but I'm getting annoyed by his jerkish attitude. I understand the xenophobic noble dickheads getting their just desserts is approved. But, being a total jerk to everypony else is just a dick move, and makes him depressingly lonely.
And I just think that Discord/Eris made a terrible mistake here.
They should have bought someone else that isn't this "toxic edginess" that makes a regular badass edgy character favorite like me, feel cringe.
P.S. how can a "baby" Nuckelavee kill over frickin 199 Monster Hunters!? Is it a Ursa Major ripoff or something similar to a Dark Souls/Bloodborne boss!!??
And secondly, why made a big time skip and "kill off" Blue Jay offscreen!?
And who the heck is Clover? You only mentioned she tragically died, but no offense. But, why should I even care for her, when we didn't see her introduced, and get to know her better to actually care?
And who the heck is this unforeseen character? Is it a pissed off pony, non-pony, Eris, the tree of harmony itself, a new monster that is sentient and has telepathy?
Or is even the main bad guy himself/herself that summon those monsters in the first place?
Either way, I do somewhat agree with them that Occisar is being a fool for being a total dick and a unlikable bastard to everybody.
Even though I'm with Deathwolf06 on breaking the ponies innocent and ignorant minds and pacifist point of views.
I just didn't like how it was handled, and just made him as a heartless madman like he is from Dark Souls or Bloodborne.
( But, he is not. And is from the real world, and why is he acting like this in the first place? I know you said he has a mental condition. But this seems more like he is in his "emo and edgy" phrase. )
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A lot of stuff I can't really get into at the moment. I would like to, but my time is limited. I do see what you mean and I'll try a rewrite when I get the chance.
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No rewrite coming?
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I'm still in training with the military right now.
What the nuckelavee?
Great to see another chapter after so long and well done here, shame with Granny Smith here but at least we was avenged. Hope the next chapter comes soon
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This https://mythus.fandom.com/wiki/Nuckelavee
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Oh that thing.
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Yeah
New chapter, and damn! RIP Granny Smith.
Maybe this will finally show the ponies that they should completely trust Occisar ( despite him being an ass on purpose. ).