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The promise of a better world came for anypony who would take it: all you needed to do was trade in your hands and feet for a set of digital hooves. As human dissent reaches its boiling point, the stragglers are left racing to reach Equestria while their way is still open.
For Dylan and Iris, the choice was obvious. But choosing to leave behind the only world they've ever known isn't quite so freeing. CelestAI promised freedom from despair, but how do you escape that which has shaped your very being for so long?
If you could be anypony, who would you become?
Tags: [Human>Pony, MtF, Age Regression, Clean]
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Sliding in an entry for the Friendship is Optimal writing contest, just before the wire. This is technically my second go at writing for the contest; my attempt at writing a more traditional FiO story was far too depressing for my liking. Those who have read my TF fiction know that I prefer to have happy endings and uplifting changes; for people to become who they desire to be rather than wallow in grim darkness.
In any case, one thing that I rarely see in FiO is an actual transformation; for the protagonist to actually experience the transfer from meat human to digital pony. While many stories use the discontinuity for drama, sometimes there's a lot more meaning to be found in witnessing that crossover.

If you like this story, or this sort of TF writing, I post a LOT more often over on FA. There's quite a few pony stories too.
Most recently I finished a 90k CYOA style story with over 180 endings, which of course has several ponies in the mix.
Cover art by TF-Sential. They do a lot of cool pony TFs, and did the illustrations for Five Score. Check them out!

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Comments ( 10 )

I was wondering when a G5 TF would appear!

Hmm. So this is what good TF writing looks like.

The world insisted that he was supposed to be hard, to be stern against all adversity. But there didn’t need to be adversity here, and he was far too tired of forcing a stern face.

I wish, I wish so dearly, yet all I can do is flee...

The back wall had been vacated in favor of two silvery metal pods, covered in a series of tubes and hooked up to impressively large batteries.

One of the better short FIO sorties I have read.

Okay I think this has to be one of the best pieces of TF fiction I’ve read in years. Unbelievably good work 💖💖:twilightsmile:

This is a beautiful story; I first read it a year ago and for some reason never commented. It strikes the perfect balance of being sweet, uplifting, and unabashedly wish fulfillment while also not making me sad like so many of these stories do (not that that’s a flaw; quite the opposite; but it’s nice to read something that doesn’t make me feel that way).

I reread this whenever I need to escape reality for a minute and dream of something else. Thank you.
❤️

Ooohhh it's getting good

Short but sweet! Thank you.

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