It's Always Been You, Even After All This Time...

Jabari Swift always held feelings for his bandmate, and fellow musician Coldcast. The griffin, always while up on stage has made magic all while dressed in tight leather.

...it's all been for naught though, eyeing him. Because his attention is never on him, isn't it...? Isn't it?

(Genderfluid original character x bisexual original male character, written for the 2021 M/M Shipping Contest)

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Grainne Ni Bhroin

Grainne Ni Bhroin #1 · Nov 2nd, 2021 · 2 · 1 ·

That was adorable.

FourShadow

FourShadow #2 · Nov 2nd, 2021 · 2 · 1 ·

Hehe. Nice work Brick, this was a cute read.

ArceusFan493

ArceusFan493 #3 · Nov 2nd, 2021 · 2 · 1 ·

I, for one, loved this.

Olden Bronie

Olden Bronie #4 · Nov 2nd, 2021 · 2 · 1 ·

What beautiful story!

daOtterGuy

daOtterGuy #5 · Nov 2nd, 2021 · 2 · 1 ·

Howdy, hi!

Your entry has been successfully entered into the MxM contest. Thank you very much for your participation and we look forward to reading!

Tarbtano

Tarbtano #6 · Nov 4th, 2021 · 2 · 1 ·

An excellent showing and a good idea of how am OC and Canon pair can still be good fun despite the reputation.

Bicyclette

Bicyclette #7 · Dec 9th, 2021 · 1 · 1 ·

Thank you Celestia! Pipp had come just at the right time to pull him out of his own brain, before it got any more yandere.

it definitely was heading there!

“Anyways, I don’t see what you’re so worried about,” Pipp said. “Bi ponies exist, and so do bi griffins. Bi the way, have you considered maybe Coldcast is one?”
She giggled at her own bad joke, her sister rolling her eyes.

but that is a great joke, though! it's a classic!

But unknowingly, he already had. Because of course Coldcast only saw him as a friend.
“Excuse me,” Jabari said, trying to hide the tears. “I need to go to the bathroom.”

oof!

“Just, oh you know what I mean,” Pipp said shooing him off before quickly tying his mane up above his head and out of his eyes. “There, now Cold can see those beautiful eyes! Like shit, you need to give yourself more credit. They’re mesmerizing dude!”
With that, she was shoving him back in Coldcast’s direction.

Pipp is quite the wingmare here, love it

“I… I’m sorry about that,” Coldcast continued to say. “I’m just in love with who I am now, the stardom. It’s not something I’m used to having and maybe I’m taking it a bit too much for granted.”
Oh. Oh.

vulnerability!

His brain was short circuiting a little, though he didn’t need it right now. He acted upon instinct, gently pressing the griffon up against the balcony railing and running his hooves through his snow-white fur.
Coldcast’s wings wrapped around Jabari, just like they always did in his every idle daydream. The griffon kept him close as they continued kissing, a gasp escaping the zorse’s mouth.

ah yeah, that exciting first moment of a daydream made real, lovingly rendered here

“You don’t believe in me? Oh, you’re crushing my heart. You’re walking all over me,” Coldcast teased. “I thought you believed I was the greatest thing to walk the face of Eques.”
“Even now it’s all about you,” Jabari said, teasingly affectionate and wondering if he should walk all over the griffon. The more he thought about it, the more he liked his hoof gently pressing into his head. “I’m going to have to break you of that habit.”
“Well then,” Coldcast grinned at the offered challenge. “Break me!”

sounds like the start of a great dynamic

Spoiler, he was totally simping.
The stage lights burned, but so did his love for the griffon under them.

aww! a nice, happy ending, with Jabari being exactly what Coldcast needs, and hope for a great future together on top of a world opening up to new possibilities. very thematic with the post-ANG setting, in the end. thank you for it!

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