Fate decided to give a random boy the ability to control the body of Princess Celestia during her times of unconsciousness. An outsider did not like how this boy was abusing that power. Now, this outsider has been placed in a similar position, but with Princess Luna instead. Perhaps it was fate's gift. Perhaps it was a curse. No pony knows for sure. What could be the plan of this new outsider and will it have any effect on the plans of the boy? That remains to be seen.
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Inspired by "What's Wrong With Tia?" (You may want to read that one first.)
Cover image made by Akili-Amethyst.
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(May contain mild swearing)
Chapters (3)
The reason I wrote this at all was because I wasn't really satisfied with how the other author ended this concept.
So at the risk of making an *a*hole out of myself, I've written a slightly sweetened and condensed solution that wraps things up in a different light.
I'm not sure "better" is the right word, since scales of "best" are all opinion-based.
Anyway, feel free to take a look.
Or don't. I don't really care.
it is better i hated how the other guy made his especially how he had originally put a comedy tag on it
Tis good. I approve.
like this
This is interesting. I'll finish this up. Is this a sequel to another story?
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More like an alternate ending to a story by someone else. As I stated in an earlier comment, I wasn't really satisfied with how they chose to end it. So, as random as my mind gets when it's disappointed, I decided to try writing a different chain of events. Whether this new ending is satisfying or not depends on the individual reader.
In a way, I just wrote "Luna's Angel vs. Celestia's Devil" to blow off steam.
So, no. It's not an official sequel.