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GNGFan21


Furry, Brony, Amateur guitarist, Amateur fanfic writer and much more. I enjoy a good stories, games, writing stories and practice playing my guitar.

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it's good, with some minor spelling errors but other than that is the death tag, why is it in here? Also, is which other characters are genderbent?

It's for The shadow Spike not sure do you need it for 1 death and as for now only Discord and thx for positive comment as you can see english isn't my native language 😀

Bleh, convenient MacGuffin is convenient.

Your picture with Barb ( Female Spike), Ember, and Smolder is very........... Interesting. :moustache:

Well thank you XD did it myself with sfm and nexgen models.

So, would Spike do the deed, or is Twilight the one to do it first?

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Nothing solid in my mind just yet :D

Reading this so far and pretty interested with what Spike has and such.

Though really not liking how Luna ends up getting easily taken out like that and needing rescue.
Its really embarrassing given how she's an expert at dream guarding/mind stuff.

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Yes I did it a little poorly now that I think myself about that chapter XD

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It sure bothers me a bunch..

Also, apparently I didn't get a notification on the reply for some reason.

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Thank you for your input. Still, I'm new and first story on FiM universe, but I have some sort of plan to explain why Luna was taken down easier than she should have hope this eases your mind :D

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Still pretty bad though she got taken out easily like that though..
The show kept having her either sidelined or just taken out so much.(Whats worse is the writers kept having her brush it off instead of being bothered by that. I know it happens to Celestia too but she at least has "manages to keep Equestria protected on her own for a 1000 years" there.)

Still pretty confused on why I got no notice on your previous reply.
I just noticed it by chance. Though I did get the notice for this reply of yours though.

Yeah.. sorry for being bothersome by the way.

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No problem about that how could I know is it okay story or not if ppl didn't give any pointers that gives me a way to be better :D

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Wonder how it goes for this case here?

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Btw, that profile pic of Barb, Ember and Smolder looks pretty hot

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Did it myself with sfm and nexgen models added little color depth with photoshop. It on my furaffinity page with text edit on it

https://www.furaffinity.net/view/38753245/

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Ok then.

How is everything going btw?

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All is good. I'm hoping to get the next chapters ready this weekend if all goes as planned.

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What will happen in the next chapter there?

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I wonder, do you have Discord(app) or Telegram so we can talk more?
Or you prefer PMs on here?

In an instant, Luna was next to Spike's copy holding one of her dual blades on his neck. "Don't try anything now that I know there is a parasite inside my nephew and I know your magic signature now I'm prepared to retaliate on any of your attacks. You should have stayed dead. Would have been easier for all of us."

Sadly since the actual Dark Spike(the one that has been implanted by Sombra's tampering on Spike's egg) is gone, a rematch is impossible so we don't know if Luna's line is true. So the embarrassment she suffered is still there..

Speaking of Nightmare Moon, wonder if she would show up?
Wished the show could have touched on Luna's dark powers there instead of just forcibly purifying her and going "darkness is always evil" and her losing said powers.

Wonder who else might join Spike's harem? Like Chrysalis?

Hmm.. you just gave me a couple of ideas need to work on that Nightmare Moon, splitting Nightmare Moon out of Luna. That would be a juicy idea. And I have a couple of ideas for Dark Spike return, but I need to make it at least sound 1/10 sane for it to work XD

A question has arisen, will there be a harem or something like that?

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Wonder if Luna would still be linked to her and dark powers and such?

If Dark Spike(the one that was implanted by Sombra's tampering) comes back, it depends on how things go for Luna's case in the scenario and if takes place in Spike's mind again(and if said Dark Spike isn't any weaker than the previous encounter)

"I know that not telling the truth is wrong, but sometimes to protect your loved ones you must. We learned it the hard way." Luna answered Torch. Celestia just nodded. "True. I don't like lying to my ponies, but sometimes to protect them we must sometimes bend the truth a little. Spike, would you show your shoulder to Torch?" Celestia asked.

Wonder what instance was Luna referring to there?

Wonder what if the potion caused the sisters to keep the benefits from the "curse" while the negatives(such as unable to have kids) is removed?
Imagine if there is even more "bonuses" from the potion(and the seed from a Divine Dragon in general)

Hahahahaha!!!!!!!

"So once more just so I understood. You need Spike's seed for this potion to remove your immortality so you can have foals of your own because your mother made a mistake so long ago casting this spell on you?" Candance asked.

Wonder if the potion lets them keep their immortality while still having foals?
Maybe cause crazy alicorn heat as well?


Is that dragoness going to be called Barb there I wonder? :0

Both of the mares started to laugh and giggle removing the lingering negativity from the room. At that moment Torch, Ember and Smolder entered the dining hall. Celestia and Luna turned towards their guests. "Lord Ember, Torch and Smolder it's good to see you decided to join us this fine morning." Celestia greeted her guests. "Thank you for the invitation, Princess Celestia." Ember answered giving a small bow at the same time. "Princess Celestia might I ask for a chance of private talk before others arrive. This is important it's about Spike." Upon hearing it's important and it's about her son Celestia's face turned serious. "Of course Torch maybe my personal study room would be the proper place for this?" Celestia asked and Torch just nodded his head. Seeing his approval Celestia teleported both of them to her personal study.

Shouldn't Luna be hearing about that too?

Wonder what else will be touched on about Nightmare Moon and Luna's dark potential there

What happened to the second half of the chapter? Its basically all blank and just quotation marks I think.

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clicked wrong button o.o sorry all

From the longer story description and the tags, without having read it yet, I would expect...

The sisters are barren, but Spike can impregnate them with his magic cum because he's a dragon. But not only them, he'll also make a harem out of the Mane Six, maybe the dragon girls we know, probably Gabby, and the CMC. Flurry, maybe, if she's old enough. Essentially, all the girls, which makes me hope this Equestria has a ludicrous female-to-male ratio or Spike collecting literally every desirable female in the world like Pokemon feels a little unfair to everyone else, who wasn't born a super-special dragon.^^

There might be a cabal of Racist Unicorn Nobles (it's always Racist Unicorn Nobles, can't remember the time it was either not a Unicorn or not a noble) as well who wish to exile and/or kill Spike for not being a Unicorn, which is totally unfair even if Spike once almost destroyed Ponyville through dragon greed-growth, which is probably not going to be brought up. The chances of this are much higher if it's a "Prince Spike" scenario.

How am I doing so far? :trollestia:

And sorry if this comes across as a little aggressive. It's not meant to be, honestly, it's more that I've seen similar setups before and some things tend to become rote after a while. Who knows, I might be completely off, and if that's the case, I will freely admit that I was. Don't let me discourage you. And if you do want to talk about things, I'm actually fairly approachable.

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No worries not aggressive just nice to see people want to read my stuff :D
It's mostly accurate but I'm going more for certain ponies for Spike, not all of them XD
In this AU there is a normal female-to-male ratio I'm sorry if this seems another way because of the way I'm writing this.
This is my first fic so I'm a fresh noob in this stuff :D

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Quick tip, if you post an answer to a comment in a different chapter than the original comment, the other party won't get a site notification! I saw yours because, well, I was browsing and curious if you'd seen mine already. :raritywink:

I'm curious to see the story then. I also know of the picture series with a Sombra-corrupted Equestria. It's very much like Fall of Equestria with Sombra, but do note that I actually like FoE so I'm not bothered at all. I rather enjoy it. Back to this story, if Spike doesn't end up with all the mares in the land, then I'm eager to see if and what other relationships develop alongside his. Maybe he can help others win their own love. If Spike's a prince here, maybe he can have a slightly less antagonistic relationship with, say, Blueblood, help him become a better person and a proper royal in his own right. I knew a fellow who was quite in love with shipping Blueblood with Gilda, of all things, but I digress. Sorry for rambling.

... of course, I'm curious about the same in the Sombra-verse, we saw plenty of the Spike harem there and I'd love to see what that world has to offer too... :twilightsheepish:

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Curious on whats going to happen next there and such.

:moustache::trollestia::twilightsfgmile:

A bit surprising about it turns out the chaos god was behind what was going on with Sombra there.

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I had that idea on my head for sometime just needed to find someway to introduce it :D

I would like to see all of Spike's girls wearing harem outfits.

Wonder if some lewd lesbian dragon action happens with Luna there given how Ember is acting all thirsty there?

So this is my first reading, but I just want to call it now, spike bangs his sister, possibly to repopulate the species through pure genetics.
Not sure if I'm right or not tho.

Oh boy this is going to be interesting! Brother and sister are going to meet soon.

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I hope to make their first meeting something unique, but knowing myself I'll probaly either shoot it way over or manage to make it on meh... level

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Shoot it way over?
Also I'm digging the story so I'll still read even if you mess that up.

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