wow just wow

Rainbow is dead.... should I be happy or sad?

Dead? This is starting to sound a bit like the plotline of a hentai... Lol. Well, the story is still awesome.

fim.413chan.net/fim/src/132225821892-I_could_clop_to_this.jpg

That was just, woah, just woah. Fave

....What just.....I don't even.....fuck it "CLOP,CLOP,CLOP,CLOP"

Just when i thought i had my bearings in this fic...

I don't know how i feel about this...

Ya know I liked this fic for awhile, but this chapter it just occurred to me that this story is really fucking depressing.

She's addicted to cock yeah I get it it's hot, I've already clopped to it. But they straight up rob her free will over a prank and then in this chapter she's pretty much murdered so she can follow through with a decision to throw away her life's aspirations she made while lacking said free will not too long ago. Then Luna just up and enslaves her. ("submit and become mine")

And what about Fluttershy or Pinkie? Are they not completely horrified to learn their friend pretty much died? What's more they've got to be in agony if the pain of experiencing her death through the mental link was enough to hurt Celestia? Yeah she can return from the afterlife but everything's pretty much over for her at this point.

I'm probably over-thinking a porn fic but I just got to say I never thought I would find myself aroused by something that also makes me want to cry.

Yeah, this chapter kinda killed what interest I had in the story. It was funny at first, but this was pretty much overkill punishment for a dumb prank. I guess it's because Celestia and Luna are acting like greek goddesses instead of caring rulers. So, yeah, umm in this case, Tia and Luna can go suck it.

See what I did there?

PS: After reading this story, you can't look at this emote the same:

Hmmmmmmmm, this is a rather impressive fic. While I am not a huge fan of the death or the change I have to say slutty Rainbow dash+Tyrant Luna and Celestia+Slutty Pinkie Pie+Lesbian Fluttershy=Epic fucking win in in my book.

Keep up the great work.

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... Rather appropriate image, given how Pinkie reacted to RD being a cock addict.
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The thing is, is it really lesbian Fluttershy if Luna has a cock in most of their sexual relations? I guess it depends on how much Luna identifies with her dick - is it a responsive strapon that she can feel with, or is it a part of her sexual identity, and she feels uncomfortable having the sexies without it... This was going to be a quick post about "straight Fluttershy", but then I started thinking too hard.

1317618 Is it really a question you're asking or is it merely an illusion conjured up by endorphins in your blood as you sleep making you dream of being awake and responding to the one known as Devilblade?

I've got pretty much the same opinion as Teraphim: The story was good until this chapter. Trollestia and a not-yet-used-to-modern-times Luna was fine, but killing Rainbow Dash was too much. If things are going to proceed like this, I'd suggest adding a Dark tag to the story.

Thumbs up for 1 to 4, but Chapter 5 makes it a thumbs down. Sorry.

I just can't imagine Luna or Celestia would just let one of their pony's get murdered like that if they had a means of knowing about it, much less one of the elements. This takes disproportionate retribution to a new level. Granted, Celestia at least seems aware of just how badly she cocked up, but Luna! At the very least Pinkie and Flutters need to get in their face about this.
Princesses, I am disappoint.

images2.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20110414202133/magicschoolbus/images/8/83/Bus-Butterfly.jpg you mean this flutterbus?

“I can't believe you sometireated, I coughed a few times and turned my face to look at her. “P-Princess Luna!?” mes,” I groaned in agitation.

...Wat? I think a sentence got put in the wrong spot there lol.

1346256 Weird. Not sure how that even happened. Thanks for pointing it out.

“You're really not going to make a guard of her, I hope.” The idea even sounded stupid to me, but more shocking was Luna making no effort to deny my suspicions.
reated, I coughed a few times and turned my face to look at her. “P-Princess Luna!?”
Instead, she simply deposited the pills on my nightstand and looked up at me, her lips curled into a devilish grin. “Well,” she began, her voice equal parts melodic and mocking, “it's either she becomes one of my guards, or she becomes a permanent resident of Tartarus.”

I think there's part of another paragraph's sentence right in the middle of that.

1348162 OK, now I know something's eating my text.

1302935 Your pic makes that comment hilarious.

What the fuck? No, you know what? Fuck this. I gave this another chance and you pull this shit on me? I should have known a story like this couldn't be all that good! Sorry Bro, but this is just too fucked up for me to go any further.

2333026 Calm down, dude.

Holy fuck is everyone out of character!

Oh yeah lets just kill somepony and send her to hell against her will. Its not like anypony cares

Look at all the butthurt.

that was kinda too much