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Woah... I'll read this later for the title!
Liking it so far!
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This looks like a pretty funny set up.
I'll be watching youuuuuuuu....
Aww, I would have liked to see that arena idea...
Maybe when all is said and done you could write it as an alternate ending?
Uh, well alternate "beginning", I suppose. Uhm, I mean, an alternate start that would have also ended it there.
Raped by both stallion guards.
Hwut?
Read it!
You know what would be an awesome twist at some later point?
What if Celestia gets struck by karma, and Rainbow Dash
winds up embarrassing Celestia shitless.
It's pretty obvious going by the name of story that the possibility I'm about to give
will most definitely not be the case. But what if it turns out that Rainbow Dash's
deepest desire was to have some 'fun time' with royalty?
Interesting
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>>> After letting Rainbow flap her lips impotently for a bit, I resumed talking. “My sister wished to have you locked in stocks at the center of the Canterlot Arena and raped by the entirety of both our stallion guards,” I stated with all the softness of someone describing a recipe for cinnamon tea. “But ultimately,” I continued, “the terms of your punishment are up to me.” <<<
Celestia is the Prophet of Truth?
Oooh, Dashie you're in for it now!
1205939 Haha, someone caught the reference! Awesome!
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A golden colored pegasus named Honey Pot, eh? A reference to Honey Dip?
1207359 Funny thing is, I didn't think about Honey Dip until AFTER I typed that. "Honey pot" is a slang for vagina I've seen in some other fics. Funny though, I stared at those words for a minute and thought "wow, that IS kinda Honey Dip like." I thought about using Honey Suckle instead, but that would have been corny even for me.
I see where this is going. Dash is going to love it in the end.
Wait- anybody else remember the Rainbow Dash lookalike from "putting your hoof down"? The one at the market?
I wonder...
While I'm enjoying the story, I do have to think for a moment about the Rainbow Pie bit here. So... Rainbow's been habitually going out and fooling around behind Pinkie's back, and feels really guilty about it.
But Pinkie is, evidently, taking just about anything that moves without Rainbow knowing it.
I really, really hope they've got an open relationship going on, because otherwise, Rainbow is gonna be VERY justifiably pissed after all of this is over, I think.
1206283 I caught it
but, you know, I doesn't matter...
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1209055 Pretty much my reaction
Awesome as always! Please keep going
1208430 Huh, you know I was thinking exactly the same thing. I mean, I do find this whole story hot and all but some part of my brain (i think the same part that found Celestia in the first chapter to be a super-bitch and made me want her to in some way not come out on top, literally or metaphorically) but for some reason I can't ignore that thought. Rainbow did something thoughtless, yes, but she never meant for it to happen and was clearly feeling very guilty. Punishment is still in order, but everyone else (well, Pinkie, Luna and Celestia) seem to be taking joy from her being humiliated and having a risk to her dreams.
That said, fuck I find the rest of this awesome. The previous-mentioned part of my brain is annoying, and I'd probably like this story more if the condition had not been forced on her by a hypocritical bitch, but other than that I can't wait for more. The whole idea of RD being acting on hidden desires, degrading ones at that, is totally hot.
I think two parts of my brains, the one that likes kinky stuff and the part that does my serious thinking, are getting into a tiff. But hey hotness wins just about anyway.
1207417 When you just said that, Winnie the Poo came to mind. That bear sure does like his honey pots.
Oh, well that seems like a resonable enough punish--
Jesus Christ! What the hell, Luna?!
Damn, we missed her late night cock sucking party.
On the bright side she seems to be coming along nicely, maybe she'll get it so bad that she'll do it right in public eh?
This is repulsive, animalistic, immoral, and debased.
My penis thanks you.
... wow how the fuck did this relationship last as long as it had???
Well, good to see things might not work out so bad and maybe Pinkie isn't so bad. Is what my brain part says.
The lower portion of my body is going "Woo! Guilt-free orgy! Cake made of cum! Kinky-sexy-fun!"
I think we all know which of those two is more interesting. I wonder if cake made with cum will taste worse than cake made with love?
I'm sorry the abusive breach of free will, in the form of Dash's punishment, is a far as I will go.
I'll neither like nor dislike this: have a good day.
Dash, get going.
Dash:
Oh dear... I have the *sneaking* suspicion that Pinkie's about to find out that Rainbow's not nearly as okay with things as she thinks she's gonna be....
I'm really expecting the big conflict to be when this is "all over."
In this episode, Dashie tries not to suck any dick on the way through the parking lot.
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Forgive me for doing this... but yeah. This is what i thought when i read your comment.
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Do I agree with you?
So far, it isn't bad. Just, for the love of Celestia, DON'T let it end like Twilight's Gradual Descent Into Sluttiness. PLEASE.
Sorry, this was all I could think of when I saw the title. That said, delightful perversion, looking forward to more.
Humorous, well written, and a good deal of eroticism. I approve
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Gotta admit that I was bothered with this, too. Thanks for pointing this out, DirigibleQuixote.
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Once again, I'd agree with you on your observation. Rainbow Dash did use a few words that would seem out of her vocabulary under normal circumstances, but it's perfectly forgivable, considering how wonderfully obscene this is
Also, I'd say that the three day sentence makes for a perfect length. Considering the material that's already been run down with Dash, it might have gotten old if it went for longer. Just my opinion, though
1264638 Well I did take out the "complainant" bit on your suggestion, but I do have to argue that stocks aren't exactly a common form of punishment nowadays, and I imagine quite a few people would have no idea what they are. I could have said Luna wanted her tied to a stake, but that's not as good a rape position as the stocks.
1264748 Another edit based on your suggestion, I replaced vulva with something a bit more common. As to the nature of the narrative, I must admit that I've thought about that myself. Last couple days, I've been reconsidering whether I should have written this in 1st person, or stuck with the 3rd person prose I used for Dream a Little Dream. I was trying to go for something a bit more personal, but perhaps it failed in other areas. While I don't think I feel like a complete re-write of the story, it is something to consider for future works.
oh dear god...... have to wonder what pinkie is tinking rigt now
Oh please in the name of all that is incredibly hot don't skip out on what happens in those barracks, please!
I'm honestly loving this so much I can't think of some non-idiotic, constructive way of telling you so, just: "I'm fucking loving this, it's so hot!". Never thought that I'd love the idea of our Element of Loyalty turning into a complete cum dumpster so much.
Why do you keep naming them after Transformers?
1278973 Because Transformers are awesome?
Ohh, can't wait to see what happens in the barracks. Please let us see it, it would be such a shame to miss it. Although it seems Pinkie might need to find a few other stallions to help with her, uh, ingredients now.
Meh. These fantasy "punishment" scenarios just don't do it for me unless it's fantasy roleplay.
I mean, it's hot, but there's no reason, rhyme, nor believability to an Equestria where sex is a corporal punishment and ponies need to be forced to enjoy their healthy sexual fetishes. it just comes off as immature. You can be just as or more dirty while being far more realistic. IC or GTFO.
I've never been a big fan of hentai mangas where the characters kept on using words like
bitch and slut BUT somehow I found this chapter to be awesome either way.
Here's a soundtrack for this story.
I got lead here from the WTF Pony Fanfiction Tumblr so this is probably going to be sick, twisted and good. All right let's do this!
For 14 hours
and pinkie wouk'd be all 
wow just wow
