Oh please in the name of all that is incredibly hot don't skip out on what happens in those barracks, please!
I'm honestly loving this so much I can't think of some non-idiotic, constructive way of telling you so, just: "I'm fucking loving this, it's so hot!". Never thought that I'd love the idea of our Element of Loyalty turning into a complete cum dumpster so much.
Ohh, can't wait to see what happens in the barracks. Please let us see it, it would be such a shame to miss it. Although it seems Pinkie might need to find a few other stallions to help with her, uh, ingredients now.
Meh. These fantasy "punishment" scenarios just don't do it for me unless it's fantasy roleplay. I mean, it's hot, but there's no reason, rhyme, nor believability to an Equestria where sex is a corporal punishment and ponies need to be forced to enjoy their healthy sexual fetishes. it just comes off as immature. You can be just as or more dirty while being far more realistic. IC or GTFO.
I've never been a big fan of hentai mangas where the characters kept on using words like bitch and slut BUT somehow I found this chapter to be awesome either way.
“Oh stop whining, Skywarp!” Starscream hissed. “As soon as I take over the Captain's position, things are going to get much more interesting around here! Just have to wait for Megatron and Soundwave to slip up, and-”
I don't know if I can read this anymore... Specifically because of the fact that you used a reference to something that's so different and odd that I honestly can't say that I'm compelled to read more. I definitely like the story, for it's humorous and doesn't have the use of drugs, but this honestly ruined my erection. Sorry.
1283575 I do not think you see the point. The sex itself is not the punishment, the punishment is the embarrassment to RD of having to reveal something she wanted to keep hidden about herself. Remember in the last chapter, RD said that she felt that the act of fellatio was a submissive act, thus something she was ashamed of. This punishment is a fitting response to her invading Fluttershy's and this Lunas rights of privacy. I do not see how you are viewing this as being out of character. I can easily see Pinkie Pie as being rather easy in the sex department. and I can see also RD simply giving up and saying "screw it, I like this, so what" in order to relieve herself of some of the burden of guilt and embarrassment.
oh dear god...... have to wonder what pinkie is tinking rigt now
Oh please in the name of all that is incredibly hot don't skip out on what happens in those barracks, please!
I'm honestly loving this so much I can't think of some non-idiotic, constructive way of telling you so, just: "I'm fucking loving this, it's so hot!". Never thought that I'd love the idea of our Element of Loyalty turning into a complete cum dumpster so much.
Why do you keep naming them after Transformers?
1278973 Because Transformers are awesome?
Ohh, can't wait to see what happens in the barracks. Please let us see it, it would be such a shame to miss it. Although it seems Pinkie might need to find a few other stallions to help with her, uh, ingredients now.
Meh. These fantasy "punishment" scenarios just don't do it for me unless it's fantasy roleplay.
I mean, it's hot, but there's no reason, rhyme, nor believability to an Equestria where sex is a corporal punishment and ponies need to be forced to enjoy their healthy sexual fetishes. it just comes off as immature. You can be just as or more dirty while being far more realistic. IC or GTFO.
I've never been a big fan of hentai mangas where the characters kept on using words like
bitch and slut BUT somehow I found this chapter to be awesome either way.
Here's a soundtrack for this story.
I got lead here from the WTF Pony Fanfiction Tumblr so this is probably going to be sick, twisted and good. All right let's do this!
For 14 hours
and pinkie wouk'd be all
What's up with all the Transformers names?
Other than that, awesome. I hope Pinkie, Fluttershy, Luna and Celestia are enjoying the show.
“Oh stop whining, Skywarp!” Starscream hissed. “As soon as I take over the Captain's position, things are going to get much more interesting around here! Just have to wait for Megatron and Soundwave to slip up, and-”
I don't know if I can read this anymore... Specifically because of the fact that you used a reference to something that's so different and odd that I honestly can't say that I'm compelled to read more. I definitely like the story, for it's humorous and doesn't have the use of drugs, but this honestly ruined my erection. Sorry.
1283575
I do not think you see the point. The sex itself is not the punishment, the punishment is the embarrassment to RD of having to reveal something she wanted to keep hidden about herself. Remember in the last chapter, RD said that she felt that the act of fellatio was a submissive act, thus something she was ashamed of. This punishment is a fitting response to her invading Fluttershy's and this Lunas rights of privacy. I do not see how you are viewing this as being out of character. I can easily see Pinkie Pie as being rather easy in the sex department. and I can see also RD simply giving up and saying "screw it, I like this, so what" in order to relieve herself of some of the burden of guilt and embarrassment.
2332990 Oh stop whining, Equestrium!
LOL TRANSFORMERS
Really really megaton soundwave starscream ? What's next otumpious prime? Oh well also lol
that part is hillourous.