Chivalry ain't dead, but I might be. Good stories? Shit stories? Who knows, hope they entertain you at the least.
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Im probably odd for saying this however im genuinely interested in this so i think ill stand by for a while.
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I'm glad you're interested my friend, I hope I can keep that interest and appreciate any feedback.
I like your mirror pool idea that anything that crosses the barrier becomes what they believe themselves to be or there goal to be, just like pinks and her goal and personal image being the one who makes beings happy and has fun.
Ugh, so many run on sentences! Do yourself a favor and read your prose out loud before you post it. Every time you take a breath, slap a period down! They're way too long as is. I can't read a story like this. Clean it up and maybe I'll come back. It's not ready.
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Sorry, I actually do tend to speak like this though. I'll see what I can do
This seems like an unusual tale, hopefully even a good deal dark. I am already invested.
Fuzzy pillar? Do go on.