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The saiyan brony


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Awesome story, looking for more chapters

I like it, wait for the next chapters !!!!

This story is awesome and the wait for chapters is being done

Very nice, can't wait for more.

This is actually really good. I like it!

Nice, can't wait for more

Ooh, he gonna be a master swordsman in a week or two.

“With this dagger, I shall set a rule upon your very soul, and unless you stab your own heart with the anti-magic sword, it shall remain in your heart for as long as you live." Or until he finds a way to make an anti-magic zone

“You pledge your life to this kingdom and become the princesses’ personal bodyguard.”

Being a bodyguard doesn't seem all that bad. Oh right...pony bodyguard. The most specist creatures on that world.

“Now for the rule I shall set upon you.” He cleared his throat. “With this magic dagger in your heart, you will never harm a princess who is true to Equestria, and come to the aid of any who calls upon you and your blade. Do you accept?”

Damn. I hope he finds a way to free himself of his forced slavery.

Yes, swat that snob back to the pile of whatever it is. Don't wanna use words for excrement, it would be offensive to them.

I was not expecting that duel to end that fast

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Ahhhh... I applaud the use of the shield scene

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It's not really forced as he did accept it but his other option was death so.....

Can't wait for the next chapter :twilightsmile:

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It still is kinda forced. Obey us or die is what they're telling him.

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"An era before the Human and nonhuman worlds were forever divided."

prefiero la espada de Yami, seria cool

me recordo al anime... una pena que solo sean 3 capitulos

Teacher sombra i like this idea

Hes so gonna get his ass handed to him

Sadly, the kids would have killed him. At the end of WW2 when the allies went into the concentration camps, some passed out food to the starving prisoners. It killed the prisoners, and I mean within the hour. They later realised that they couldnt feed more than a few tablespoons (or teaspoons) of food over long periods of time, until they could eat more regular portions. True story

The Monk

This may be a good story, But Im stopping at chapter 1. I have a aversion to stories where someone is greatly and viciously wronged, and yet forgives and works with those who did it.

Again, this may be a good story, but I really cant stomach the concept of that.

“Now for the rule I shall set upon you.” He cleared his throat. “With this magic dagger in your heart, you will never harm a princess who is true to Equestria, and come to the aid of any who calls upon you and your blade. Do you accept?”

No


Monk

Hey when do you think The next Chapter come out ??🤔

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