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The saiyan brony


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Ooh this is promising and sorry about your grandma.

After taking out the trash, I checked to see if the old lady was hurt. I may not want to be a hero, but that doesn't mean I can't be kind. When I turned, I half expected her to be shaking like a leaf; instead, she was standing there sitting on one of the trash cans. "A bit on the unorthodox side, but there is still hope to make a hero out of you yet." Before I could even respond, she disappeared in the blink of an eye. "The pains of your past weigh heavily on your heart, making it cold and bitter." I looked around, trying to see where her voice was coming from. "But there's still a chance for you to make a future for yourself."

I'd like to see a story where they say this and the mc just becomes a villain just to spite them proving them wrong

Hmm i hope this guy dose not end up becoming a hero i really do this guy should just leave and go live in a forest away from all this shit and let the world burn

or become an anti-hero and just fucking kill everyone until there know one left to bother him ether way is good (just checked the tags it has death and violence he can go around killing all the bad guys YAY!) if people force him to help they cant complain about how he help can they(fuck madam web she is a real bitch and anyone else who is trying to force this guy to fight for them and if Luna or Celestia try to fucking Conscript him i hope he bitch slaps them both into the fucking ground)

with a start like this one this guy need to just not help and stay out of this shit for once in a spider man universe id like to see a spider man that tell madam web to go fuck her self and dose not end up helping her in the end

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agreed or an anti-hero just to tell show madam web what happens when you force the issues

Hello, Ben. I am Madame Web

YES!!! I love Madame Web!! When I read her lines. This and one other voice is the only Madam Web voice I deem to fit.

(Voice Joan Lee)

(Voice Susanne Blakeslee)

Edward Brock.. Eddy.. Holy crap.

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Lol I was hoping someone would catch that. There are a few references to the spider man series so try and keep a eye out. Also spread the word of this story thank you!

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I'll keep a eye out for them. Can't wait for more.

this seams to be a good start for a story now time will tell if the story pulls together .

9799370
I got the perfect theme for the story.:pinkiehappy:

Also LOVE the story already, you don't see that many Fluer shipping stories. I can't wait for more.:pinkiehappy:

I'm just loving this story so far hope it comes back.

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Here's an alternate intro song option.

Yo...YO!!! This shit is good!!

First off. Seeing as he is jobless. I am glad he got a new job and it's something a Parker has done in the past.

Second. Since he place burned down.. I honestly would love to see Madam Web pull some magical bull and at least. Get the pictures that Ben wants. At least them.

Third. Glad to see Fleur de Lis was so kind and friendly person to Ben. He needs that more then ever.

Fouth. I want.. And I mean. I really want.. To have Fisk know Peter was Spider-Man and when Ben and Fisk meet. I imagine it would go like

Ben: It's great to meet you Mr. Fisk. My name is Ben. But..you knew my father actually

Fisk: I did?

Ben: Yes... His name..was Peter Parker.

Fisk: !!!!! Nani!!!!!

Ok. The fourth one is a bit of a joke. But That would be epic to see

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I personally think this one is better, but after hearing that one, they're both pretty good.

Maybe my luck is finally changing for the better.’

oh no... Ben, you shouldn't have said that...

Can’t wait for the next chapter

‘Oh, hello there Parker family luck, I was wondering when you would show up again, ’ was all I could think up before being thrown onto the ground by the massive canine as it brought it’s jaws to my face “AAHHHHHH!!!”

Damn, Ben just can’t get a break can he?

This story is missing a crossover tag.

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Spidey luck is going to strike

Waiting for the continuation of the story

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