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Mister V


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This story is a sequel to Equestria Girls: Disney Odyssey: Snow White and the Seven Dwarfs


It's Trinity's first day of school and she is going to right a report on a famous story for literacy class with help from her friends, regarding the moral of the story. Fortunatly, they will find their answers in the Book of Disney, while they help a cricket be a good consience to little wooden head who wishes to become a real boy.

During this adventure, they meet a blue fairy who holds a clue to the magic of The Book of Disney

This is the second book in the series.

NOTE: No copyright infringement intended.
NOTE 2: I do not own the rights for these films, the songs in them, or even the lyrics to those songs.
NOTE 3: Under Section 107 of the Copyright Act 1976, allowance is made for "fair use" for purposes such as criticism, comment, news reporting, teaching, scholarship, and research. Fair use is a use permitted by copyright statute that might otherwise be infringing. Non-profit, educational or personal use tips the balance in favor of fair use.

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Comments ( 103 )

Okay, I like the idea of the story. Each of the girls is already aware of the story of Pinocchio, or at least the basics of it. They're trying to determine what the true moral of the story is, when no one ever said a story must only have one moral.

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Well thank you very much. I pride myself in originality.

You do know that the movie is vastly different from the original book, right? I'm just saying.

Okay, the dialogue here feels a lot more natural than the dialogue from the previous installment.

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I know. But there are points in the movie that are similar to the book.

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Still, don't you think it's a little unwise to use a movie to write a book report? I mean, it's not that bad an idea as long as the movie is supplementing the book rather than replacing it, but you didn't exactly make that clear. Yeah, I was quite meticulous as a student, so school assignments are serious business for me. :twilightsheepish:

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Is that supposed to be a question or a statement? If it's a question, what's it about? :applejackunsure:

If it's about me as a student, yeah, I really was that meticulous. :twilightsheepish: If it's about using movies to write book reports, yeah, the book needs to be the primary source. :twilightsheepish:

This is getting interesting. Every character got involved in the chapter, so excellent work in that regard.

when are you going to add more to the story mister v ?

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As soon as the next chapter is ready. Just be patient. As they say, Rome wasn't built in a day.

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Just be patient. As they say, Rome wasn't built in a day.

Oh my! I love Hello Kitty. I'm afraid I'm not too familiar with her outside of the merchandise though. :twilightsheepish:

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That's okay. Just so long as you know who she is, that's fine by me.

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Perhaps, if you got any good ideas.

Statler and Woldorf. Those two could show up anywhere and no one would bat an eyelid.

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OC stands for original character. If your story features a character that you made up on your own, it should have that tag.

Well, they got out of that mess, now onto the next one.

Now as I said before, Rarity was only partially right about Jiminy coming. For not too far away, while the group was trying to break the boys out of their cage, Jiminy Cricket was sitting alone with his umbrella over his head still thinking in Pinocchio as the storm began to lessen.

It's not at it's about

“Wait a minute!” Fluttershy said, realizing something. “We can’t forgot that Jiminy is still out there.”

It's not forgot it's forget

"Yeah." Jiminy Cricket "Looks pretty hopeless. It’ll take a miracle to get us outta here."

Do you mean Jiminy Cricket said sadly

"Pinocchio?" He said "Pinocchio!" ans as he walked down the street, he saw Stromboli's wagon passing by the street.

It said ans but i think you mean and Also instead of said you mean called

"Whoa, so that necklase is actually a was of calling the Blue Fairy?" Rarity asked in amazement.

1: it's necklace not necklace

2: a was doesn't match but something Else which i don't know does

"No, it was my fault." Jiminy Cricket "I shouldn’t have walked out on you."

It's Jiminy Cricket said in regret

"Oh, buck up, son." Jiminy Cricket said as his voice started to break. "It could be worse. Be cheerful… like me!" But Pinoke couldn't help but shed a tear that landed on Jiminy, drenching him completely. "Aw, take it easy son." He then took out a tissue and put up to Pinoke's nose. "Come on, blow." Doing what he's told, he blew his nose on the tissue. "Atta boy." Jiminy then blew his nose before looking up. "Oh well, it stopped raining anyway." Sunset then decided to cheer everyone up with some words of motivation.

It's put it up not put up

“Yeah.” Pinocchio answered before saying something that made the group face fault. “Two big monsters! With big green eyes.” At that moment, his nose began to grow. “Why I…”

It's face eachother not face fault

"Psst." Jiminy whispered. "Leave outta this."

It's leave me outta this

"We’ll be good, won’t we?" Pinocchio, Sam, Chip & Jiminy Cricket in unison, causing everyone else to laught

It's said in unison not in unison Also you accidentally put laught instead of laugh

"My!" Fluttershy said in astonishment. "People come an go so quickly here."

It's and not An

"Yeah, I'll can keep him in the dark." The robot answered. "You guys better go though, before he checks thing out here."

It's not i'll but I

"Yeah, I'll can keep him in the dark." The robot answered. "You guys better go though, before he checks thing out here."

It's before he figures things out not before he checks thing out here

"Yeah, that's right, John." Gideon as he took a drink before one of his hiccup made a mess of beer all around him

It's Gideon said not Gideon as

Now then gentlemen. Honest John began before takeing a drag on his cigar. "What’s your proposition?"

You forgot the quote Marks between now then gentlemen

Now then gentlemen. Honest John began before takeing a drag on his cigar. "What’s your proposition?"

It's taking not takeing

"Well..." Coachman began before puffing on pipe. "How would you blokes like to make some real money?" He then droped a big sack of gold coins onto the table.

It's on his pipe not on pipe

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