I think it's a good idea to show the dark side of alcoholism with the dude being violent drunks and that it will be a real struggle to stay supportive with him in trying to help him in stop drinking, and solved his unresolved personal issues that a way before he arrived in Equestria. It's clear that he has not build up resistance to whatever that triggers anxiety to out of control. I would supposed that he never had a stable family life maybe, along with predispositions for it. I wonder how Ponies usually deal with alcoholism especially belligerent subjects, I would assume that he would need a serious shock to his system to them him to wake up at how it's destroying his life.
Between Eric and Luna? She already burned that bridge, so I don't think she can really be considered friend material.
I think it's a good idea to show the dark side of alcoholism with the dude being violent drunks and that it will be a real struggle to stay supportive with him in trying to help him in stop drinking, and solved his unresolved personal issues that a way before he arrived in Equestria. It's clear that he has not build up resistance to whatever that triggers anxiety to out of control. I would supposed that he never had a stable family life maybe, along with predispositions for it. I wonder how Ponies usually deal with alcoholism especially belligerent subjects, I would assume that he would need a serious shock to his system to them him to wake up at how it's destroying his life.
The story's great, but the grammar could use some work.