11078728 Same. Personally I'm questioning if the author was really intending for Luna to make an apology, because this chapter seem more about Eric going on about how has no right to complain and should forgive them and be grateful for all they've done. Doing this makes it seem like the author is trying to say Luna did nothing wrong and Eric should be apologizing, which is kinda fucked up and just makes things worse.
Tl;dr The chapter reads like the victim is apologizing to the wrongdoer, instead of the other way around.
"I uh," I used one of my hooves to rub the back of my head, this was strange all together from being in Creekville drinking to suddenly royalty bowing to me and asking for forgiveness. It felt like everything I was expecting just flipped on its head. "I may not remember it at the moment and while truth be told I am freightened by the whole air of mystery on what happened, I feel it's important I want to respect and forgive your genuineness"
Nice to see an update on this story again, hope to see more.
Can't wait for next chapter 😊
Good chapter! Iook forward towards the next update.
This is an interesting concept, but the writing needs significant improvements.
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I agree
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Same. Personally I'm questioning if the author was really intending for Luna to make an apology, because this chapter seem more about Eric going on about how has no right to complain and should forgive them and be grateful for all they've done. Doing this makes it seem like the author is trying to say Luna did nothing wrong and Eric should be apologizing, which is kinda fucked up and just makes things worse.
Tl;dr The chapter reads like the victim is apologizing to the wrongdoer, instead of the other way around.