Nice to see a continuation for the story, I wonder why Luna brought him at Canterlot castle after the meeting at the bar? I would wonder how he managed to pay his bar tab when he firs arrived at that town and if he still has to pay for it. I wonder how his first interaction with the ponies went for him initially, as a delirious pony who thinks e is a human? those the fact that he is a outsider means that he could get special treatment, will he have to stay in the castle or will he be sent away later at a remote far flung area of Equestria, or will he get a proper primer in how to function in pony society. I could guess he could stay at that castle, to keep a close eyes on him and probably give him a job as a servant or staff to keep him busy, or even a personnel valet of Luna or Celetria, through I don't know how his alcoholism might become a problem still. I am honestly hopping he doesn't get sent permanently to Twilight to learn friendship lessons as it's already been done to death with other HiE and it would be nice to see more castle intrigue or geo-political stuff or even magical ones, he might make for a great guinea pig for the court wizards. I am assuming that he is an earth pony right?
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"General Brisk, I believe we have informed you that we would like our new guest treated with the upmost kindness you could muster, did we not?"
"Utmost kindness" seems extremely hypocritical to hear coming from either of the princesses after Luna's first impression, considering she proved herself in one moment to be actively hostile and malicious to Eric. Luna went from hello to unprovoked hostility, so her dragging him off somewhere while delirious can only been considered a prelude to more of the same. Hopefully Eric doesn't trust or tolerate them at all.
10974875 I say it because there's been a lack of apologies and/or reassurance that Luna isn't still hostile and viewing him as a threat that must be dealt with.
This is an interesting start.
Monk
"Knowledge is power and power corrupts, so study hard and be evil." - Reykan
I'm loving it so far, my only gripe is the lack of punctuation at the end of a quotes. But overall very nice, keep up the amazing work!
Nice to see a continuation for the story, I wonder why Luna brought him at Canterlot castle after the meeting at the bar? I would wonder how he managed to pay his bar tab when he firs arrived at that town and if he still has to pay for it. I wonder how his first interaction with the ponies went for him initially, as a delirious pony who thinks e is a human? those the fact that he is a outsider means that he could get special treatment, will he have to stay in the castle or will he be sent away later at a remote far flung area of Equestria, or will he get a proper primer in how to function in pony society. I could guess he could stay at that castle, to keep a close eyes on him and probably give him a job as a servant or staff to keep him busy, or even a personnel valet of Luna or Celetria, through I don't know how his alcoholism might become a problem still. I am honestly hopping he doesn't get sent permanently to Twilight to learn friendship lessons as it's already been done to death with other HiE and it would be nice to see more castle intrigue or geo-political stuff or even magical ones, he might make for a great guinea pig for the court wizards. I am assuming that he is an earth pony right?
Also if you are ever looking to commission a cover art for your story please let me know in a PM, and here is a demonstration of my speedpaitning videos; enjoy.
"Utmost kindness" seems extremely hypocritical to hear coming from either of the princesses after Luna's first impression, considering she proved herself in one moment to be actively hostile and malicious to Eric. Luna went from hello to unprovoked hostility, so her dragging him off somewhere while delirious can only been considered a prelude to more of the same. Hopefully Eric doesn't trust or tolerate them at all.
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I feel that's a bit much considering that there's likely a lot we don't know that happened when he was blackout drunk.
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I say it because there's been a lack of apologies and/or reassurance that Luna isn't still hostile and viewing him as a threat that must be dealt with.
Update?
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Just uploaded a chapter! Hope that satiated your hunger for a bit, I'll try to work more on this story!