When Twilight tries to solve the space/time paradox, a strange sound comes from her room, breaking her concentration, sending her and the gang way off coarse. With the gang separated and in new "human" body's, in a strange new world of super heroes and villains, how will the mane six ever survive?
-Story progress has been halted. I'll work on it again someday, but due to life getting hectic I was forced to take a break from it, and now I simply cant get back into it. For those of you who enjoyed this silly thing, I apologize, but I promise I'll be at it again with a Rarity X Tony Stark chapter. Lets aim for this summer huh? And I'll hopefully have a editor by then...-
this is pretty interesting
The pacing in this story is... strange.
Not to mention some of the grammar.
SO. MANY. SPELLING ERRORS.
I have to admit, though... this is really interesting. In my opinion, better than the Fluttershy chapter. Though I like Spiderman more than X-Men anyway.
Yea, my spelling is a issue, I still have yet to really do a formal re-reading of it, other than just skimming over it for major issues.... but yea, ill get to that soon enough, but i want to finish the rarity bit.
1190423 May I be a pre-reader?
I have to agree with Freeze Flame. May I help edit this?
FUCKING AWESOME WITH THE FLUTTERSHY LOGAN COMBO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
MOAR
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I wasn't going to work on that chapter until next weekend, but if you like it so much, I guess i got to put my ass in gear.
LittlePixel you kick ass
too much epic to put into words
Flutter/Logan...if only that was true....
Ooh, I like it!
I LOVE this. Please make more! PLEASE!
UPDAAAAAAAAAAAAAATE!plz?
Just....please work on your punctuation. Grammar, too.
Otherwise, I love it! Hope this gets off hiatus!
In what chapter does this take place?
More please
next chapter
1225581 please continue the story
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FacelessFawks,
If you need an editor, I’m willing to do that. I’ll help you out.