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FacelessFawks


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When Twilight tries to solve the space/time paradox, a strange sound comes from her room, breaking her concentration, sending her and the gang way off coarse. With the gang separated and in new "human" body's, in a strange new world of super heroes and villains, how will the mane six ever survive?

-Story progress has been halted. I'll work on it again someday, but due to life getting hectic I was forced to take a break from it, and now I simply cant get back into it. For those of you who enjoyed this silly thing, I apologize, but I promise I'll be at it again with a Rarity X Tony Stark chapter. Lets aim for this summer huh? And I'll hopefully have a editor by then...-

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The pacing in this story is... strange.
Not to mention some of the grammar.

SO. MANY. SPELLING ERRORS.

I have to admit, though... this is really interesting. In my opinion, better than the Fluttershy chapter. Though I like Spiderman more than X-Men anyway.

Yea, my spelling is a issue, I still have yet to really do a formal re-reading of it, other than just skimming over it for major issues.... but yea, ill get to that soon enough, but i want to finish the rarity bit.

I have to agree with Freeze Flame. May I help edit this?

FUCKING AWESOME WITH THE FLUTTERSHY LOGAN COMBO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

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I wasn't going to work on that chapter until next weekend, but if you like it so much, I guess i got to put my ass in gear.

Just....please work on your punctuation. Grammar, too.
Otherwise, I love it! Hope this gets off hiatus!

It wasn’t until after I completely beat his face in that he wanted me.

In what chapter does this take place?

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FacelessFawks,

If you need an editor, I’m willing to do that. I’ll help you out.

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