A rewriting of an old story: with help from Zachthebrony
A What If about if Hulk landed in Equestria instead of Planet Hulk. For those not familiar with Planet Hulk. Its when Reed Richards, Namor the Sub-Mariner, Tony Stark, Professor Charles Xavier, Doctor Steven Strange and Black Bolt decide to launch the Hulk into space and Hulk lands on a planet. No spoilers. In this story, Hulk/Bruce Banner lands in Equestria and collapses from hunger. He is nursed back to health by Princess Luna on the day before Shining Armour and Cadance get married. Bruce and Luna realize they have a lot more in common than just a pulse. When Queen Chrysalis crashes the wedding, Hulk helps the Mane 6 in the battle. That is if Hulk doesn't destroy all of Equestria first. Also why is there chocolate milk seeping through the pictures?
As a Disclaimer: I do not own Bruce Banner or any other bipedal characters in this story. They are owned by Marvel Comics and Stan Lee
Hmm... I'll follow this for now but i do have a few issues. First off it seems very rushed. Also you would think he would be trying to get away from civilization not trying to mingle.
Okay before reading, still hoping the Silver Surfer makes an apperance =) i liked WWH so i've got high hopes.
The only correction I have to make is that Xavier and Namor had nothing to do with sending the Hulk into space. Namor was completely against it, while Charles wasn't at the meeting where the decision was made (although he later confirmed in World War Hulk that if he had been there, he'd have made the same decision as the rest of the Illuminati).
Okay, afterwards this is incredibly short and rushed and i'm a tiny bit dissapointed. That said, i still have hope that this will go very well and will be keeping an eye on it =)
1235531 Hulk doesn't know that Namor and Xavier had nothing to do with it. Thanks however for telling me that :) I will definately start to re-reading WWH
1235551 Thank you I am definitely going to start expanding this and slowing the pace.
1235342 Banner's a scientist. He is very interested that these ponies are hospitable, or at least the three that are in the first chapter. He also feels somewhat indebted to mostly Fluttershy for saving him. Don't get it twisted he's still very guarded but he feels somewhat obligated to "repay the debt" so to speak.
this is good
“Welcome, everybody deserves some kindness no matter what they have done in their past.”
it should be "everyPONY"...
... sorry
When it inevitably happens and the princess(es) attack they are going to bite off more than they can swallow.
Could have been an interesting twist, if Bruce had listened to the door when Rarity spoke about being Celestia's property and went into a fit of hulk rage.
1239567 Then there would be no more story
I LOVED the events of Planet Hulk and its sequel World War Hulk, just the idea of it was a wonderful read.
Having the Hulk land in Equestria is something else especially given the timeline of it all.
Still this looks like an exciting read and if you'll add that weird "Human" obessive Mare, Lyra Heartstrings into the story ?
Still please do keep up the good work upon such a great storyline like this one.
I wonder what would happen if Bruce and/or Hulk mentions the other Marvel Heroes to the girls ?
Great job at the remake of the first chapter. I would truly understand if Luna and Fluttershy maybe able to help Bruce and the Hulk out abit.
Luna could understand what Bruce is going through and Fluttershy can calm him and Hulk down a bit.
Nice idea overall as I cannot wait to see what happens next in this storyline that I'm tracking....and I still hope that Bruce is able to mention other Marvel heroes to the girls.
P.S. Whether or not they were invovled in the banishment, I would love to see Bruce think that the geniuses and leaders of the Marvel Universe, including the Black Panther, thought it was bright idea send him away.
Plus, what about the She-Hulk/Jen Walters, will she be mentioned in the story ?
1358574 She-Hulk/Jen Walters will be mentioned by name, especially since there are many inquisitive ponies at the royal wedding. Many other Marvel characters will be mentioned although most likely not by name.
I am very glad so far nobody has criticized my view on what Nightmare Moon is to Luna. As it seems a lot of people view Nightmare Moon as something/somepony removed from her personality or a spell that was lifted and no longer is a threat.
Celestia isn't a total troll nor a dictator in this version.
She is the good, kind alicorn she always has been. However Luna feels like she will always be inferior to her. I hope that also got through.
Best wishes
tis a bit shakey and flimsy at times, also you are aware that they are herbavores I trust, chicken soup is a questionable dish,
also perhaps you could put more brackground behind this Celestibitch charterization, everything feels cramped and out of nowhere, but it has potential.
looking forward to hulk smashing changelings.
more?
1421743 Definately will be more once classes slow down
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are you looking to ship Luna and the hulk... what the fuck is wrong with you.
1461332 There are worse ships out there. For example, Fluttershy and a tree, so just chill out dude.
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1462081Thank you Dani and in all honesty no. There is no romance in the hash tags so its safe to say Luna isn't looking for romance and more or less a person who can relate to her.
1462411 no problem
I hate it myself when someone reads a story and then complains, if they don't like it, don't read. Constructive criticism is ok, but saying an author is sick because of the story is just dumb.
DANM MY OTHER HULK STORY IS ALSO ON HAITIS OR WHATEVER DAMMIT DAMMIT DAMMIT (stomps around room saying DAMMIT)
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
1747139 It'll be back soon I am thinking over Christmas break.
ok ill wait no rush BTW luna in best pony
1747562 Amen to that Luna always doubles fun.
yep
Surly in 3 months you've thought of something, I mean this story has promise, don't stop writing it.
1747562>>1747579 HUZZAH Fellow Luna Lovers
also Y there no Luna icon?
It's really a good plot, a perfect combination, duck life enjoyed.
i like this character, always waiting for new parts! octordle