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Celly Da Pancake


Pulling the puzzles apart.

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Mortality is truly the bane of happiness, as Luna soon comes to find out. Time is no longer on her side—it never truly was. As such, she finds that the time she has is now limited and she doesn't know how to spend it.

Luckily for her, she has the best sister anypony could ever ask for to help her make the most of it.


Posted at the behest of Jubal.

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Great feels from the heart. No need other then simple age. Its focus at its heart. Just like the words from the story spend your time.

Like your words wisely.

Well done!

On a side note. Im actually writing among other things. A longer more drawn out version of celestia and Luna faceing mortality. Though the themes are similar in they have to face such a change. Its handled more like epic or a series of vignettes that all connect with minimal time skips.

The reason are whole not their own. Age it is not.


Thank you for sharing is touching story!

This is awesome! So many awesome details and I love the characterization of the two.

Daaawwww. I loved this. It's nice to see a fic that shows a nicer side to the concept of the Princesses loosing their immortality. The chemistry these two had was just heartwarming as well, very nicely done.

Comment posted by TheOneAJ deleted Apr 3rd, 2021
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