Nicholas doesn't really know Princess Celestia. Sure, he's met her once or twice, when Twilight was still trying to find a way to get him home. Exchanged pleasantries and what not. But never had he had a real, sit-down conversation with her.
Now, he's been summoned to Canterlot to work as Celestia's advisor. He has no other options but to accept.
Cover art used with permission by Miokomata. Go check them out!
Audio reading of prologue by StraightToThePointStudio. Go check them out!
Chapters (3)
Sorry for any confusion, it was not supposed to be complete
Well, it appears life isn't always ideal on Equestria eitheir...
It is a good start - lad, you may have bitten way more than you could chew. Can you deal with the nobles, the VIP, the movers and shakers of Canterlot?
We shall see!
Are you sure you're not Cackling Moron, only posting under a new screen name and having knowledge of how to add an image to the story?
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As far I know, Cackling Moron do mostly Slice of Life with much random-sillyness.....
Good start, no grammar issues. Let's see where this takes us.
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I am the alt created before the original.
Moar pls
Pretty well-written thus far, nice start. Looking forward to more.
nice start
In one paragraph it is stated:
I think the following paragraph bed should be couch:
Overall off to a good start, will track and see how the story develops.
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Fixed, thank you!
Interesting start so far, really looking forward to seeing more!!
I'm in! good set up so far, a little rushed BUT... just a prologue. so I'm in !
Nice little prologue. I'm in
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Nah, it couldn't be him, this guy knows how to use the romance tag.
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Also this is laying the groundwork for my idea of a good time!
Not that I have any particular favourites.
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This is very nice, can’t wait to see where this goes
I see greatness in your story, keep it up.
Excellent! Perfect hook to keep the reader interested, great grammar and sentence structure as well for an easy and pleasant read. Keep it up!
WHEN WILL THERE BE MORE!
Wholesome romance is my guilty pleasure, comes with being a sad loner I guess.
Ohh a story with a black main character, dont see many of those here, now I am interested.
I am the Ersatz Hardonirac!
No
But I'll likely enjoy this story, I mean I already like it so far
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Not a bad start. You've definitely shown you know how to write. Do keep going!
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I'm trying to finalize some of my other stories at the moment, but as soon as everything is taken care of, I can guarantee you will be seeing more of this story!
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You know I'm right, you no romance tagging goblin!
I'm intrigued so far...
I'm liking this thus far!
That hook in the prologue, my goodness it's so GOOD! Absolutely everything about this looks fantastic and I have a strong feeling that this going further down the line is simply going to make it even more fantastic! Hope ya didn't mind, but I just needed to make a reading on the prologue!
Audio Linky!: https://youtu.be/5tBo4I4rbLA
(I don't mean to offend anyone with this comment in any way!)
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No way! You are simply the best person ever. Thank you so much!
Oooh, this looks promising.
Best of luck with this, I'll definitely stick around.
I'm into this.
Can’t wait for more!!
I like that we are introduced to the characters and setting after whatever event or circumstance brought a human into Equestria, and that we see him already established and somewhat accepted. Too many of these types of stories lose me in the first chapter when the human lands in Equestria because my eyes glaze over when an attempt is made to normalize the shock such a situation would create within the first chapter.
The hook was nicely relatable and it looks like you’re off to a good start. I’m looking forward to seeing where this leads.
Hope you update this story soon :)
It's quite rare to find a story about Celestia and the local human
I'm quite excited to see what you pull off!
Sorry folks, one more day before update. Just making sure I'm not releasing you people complete shite for a chapter!
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Found this in the also liked, piqued my interest, hope it's good!! ^^
I like I so far!... Kinda hits hard considering I've felt the same way as the main character.
pog
I'm sure there is a lot wrong with this chapter, so please comment if you notice something that doesn't make any sense
The chapter felt very short, but it was well managed, although I would have liked it to be longer, the introduction was good, a perfect fit in information and good writing quality did the trick.
this is cute and i have enjoyed it thus far. try not to worry about the quality. you've got that down-pat
quite entertaining, i like it, keep up the good work !!!
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Something I noticed was that the sun rose without Celestia noticing. She kinda has to manually raise it.
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fixed
Good job on this chapter!
Worth the wait :)
Why the characters were spot on. Tia was a little eager but that was bout it.