In this alternate time line, Celestia successfully defeats and reforms Nightmare Moon single handedly when she sees signs of her return. This boosts her ego up and over the edge and soon Equestria is thrown into a blister of sunlight.
[All Credit for Characters go to Hasbro & Lauren Faust "My Little Pony: Friendship Is Magic" 2010-2019 ]
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Nice story! please continue
I'm curious how Celestia become Daybreaker. The three first chapter didn't even painting her in a negative light,
or... so what Celestia herself believe... it's narated in first person after all.
Please continue. I know you have a lot to do tho, so take your time.
Oh shit.
I like how you describe how Celestia become Daybreaker. It so rare to be told in first person narrative format.
I think you need to go through this again. I picked up on a few mistakes. I'm enjoying it so far regardless.