It was supposed to be a normal trip into the Everfree Forest for Apple Bloom. She had been through this trek many times as a filly. Yet on this fateful autumn evening, Apple Bloom took a wrong turn and ended up being nearly killed by a raging manticore. Injured and left for dead, Apple Bloom was rescued by a mysterious creature.
It was made to be to the custodian of the last remains of a long lost race. It has been tasked to do whatever it takes to carry out its creator's last will. So when Apple Bloom stumbled upon its hiding spot, it did the only thing it could and bringing her to its layer to save her.
This story was my entry in Two Bit's Autumn Pony to Human TF story contest last year, only modify and expanded some more. Totally forgot about it until recently. Figures now would be a perfect time to publish it. Happy First Day of Autumn, everyone!
Im intrested
Very much enjoying this, but I'd suggest italisizing a person's thoughts.
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There. Got it fixed.
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Hows the writing
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Finishing up the next chapter this week. Hope to have it published next week, around the 20th. Aiming to have four chapters for this story. Each probably on the 20th of the autumn month and last day of autumn.
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Sounds cool
I nevet been more interested in a baby then now
for some reason, I imagined Eos sounding like bill cipher.
The mechacore is just forced at this point it in my opinion at least
this was good way to end the story
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Thanks! Although, who said that this will be the definite end? 😉
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i ment this story not any future sequels lol. my one grip with it is that the manticore fight went on a tad long in my opinon.