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The power exchange between Twilight and the sisters is about to be completed. Then, thanks to an ancient proclamation, things hit a snag. How will Twilight feel about this intrusion on her non-existent love life?
Chances are, not very good.
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Oh boy. This might be interesting but we shall see.
Well then.
Magna Carta... Not really an Easter egg
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That's the plan anyway.
10407591
You got it.
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Well.
10407720
Maybe. More of a 'play on words', I suppose. Oh well, you still spotted it so kudos.
TWi:
Celestia: bu..
TWI:
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An understandable reaction considering their history
I imagine Twi doing a long silent scream during that ending lead up.
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Needless to say, her instant reaction will be the first thing you'll read next chapter...
So... are we just going to ignore the millennium Celestia spent ruling alone? Or did Luna still count even while in lunar exile?
An interesting concept, though the dialogue feels stilted at times. Lots of monologues and dramatic proclaimations than something more organic. Still, looking forward to seeing where you go with this.
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Hmm, I think I worked something out for that period. The history behind the show is more complicated than it first appears, and I intend to read up on more of it for this fic.
And I agree, it is a good concept I’ll try to make the best of. Thanks for your considered critique and the story follow. I hope I don’t disappoint with what I have in store for the future!
10407832
She might have ruled alone dont mean she didnt have husbands or wives, afterall blueblood had to come from somewhere
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That's the thing about Blueblood. In order for him to be Celestia's nephew (however many 'great's come before it), it means that Luna got it on with somepony before her banishment (unless there's some unknown sibling from ages past that nobody knows about and their existence has fallen off the face of the earth/Equus). And that leaves you to wonder: who was her lover?
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Honestly I wouldn't be surprised if he was celestia great great grandson or something like and she just claims he a nephew for political reasons or embarrassment
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Well, if that were the case... WHO WAS CELESTIA'S LOVER?? ENQUIRING MINDS WANT TO KNOW!!!
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even she doesn't know after all the royal guard serve at her pleasure all of them
10407832
Stilted doesn't even begin to describe it. It's like the author was determined to live up to his (?) name with all the cheeky put-downs and asides.
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Well, everyone has their own style of writing, and mine isn't for everyone. But I've been doing it for years, and enough people seem to enjoy it for me to persevere. You can't please everyone, but I think I've found my niche and I'm happy with it.
I hope you come back to this some day.