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Sunlight Rays


Love is Love, Pride is Pride, People is People. Be who you are, for there are no wrong answers in who you want to be. 21 yo trans girl, bi/poly.

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It's been ten years since six friends defeated Nightmare Moon. Ten years since a mare began her journey through friendship. Ten years since a path far into the future was set for her.

And, to that, they raise a toast in a bar.


Based on the 3rd-place winning entry to ROBCakeran53's 37th Panic Write of the Quills and Sofas Speedwriting Group. Inspired by 4EverfreeBrony's Hoping and Friends Up Above. The prompt was Cocktails.

Special thanks to Holtinater, Emotion Nexus, AuroraDawn, Speccer, and Stinium_Ruide for editing, and also thanks to iAmSiNnEr, Xrevias, and Valoria for prereading.

Even though this story is a prequel to Three Tenses of Friendship, it is also meant to be a standalone story. No knowledge of the events in the sequel is required.

Featured two hours after publication! Y'all are awesome! :pinkiegasp:

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Comments ( 12 )

Welcome back, Sunlight I'm glad to see you writing once more.
Now about this little gem of yours. I remember reading Three Tenses of Friendship and I can easily see how the two relate, and yet this one is easily able to stand on it's own.
The way you crafted this around well cocktails was quite interesting. I didn't exactly know where it was going right away but once EverLight showed up, I was able to piece it together.
I always enjoy reading your stories and I feel like this one is certainly one of your better ones yet, perhaps even better than Three Tenses of Friendship and the message here is quite well executed. Good job, keep up the great work. <3

It's a nice story. I think chapter two is unneccesary. Chapter one makes very clear what's going on.

Twilight, just how many personal paradoxes are in your timeline?

This was a very good 2-shot.

Sunny you amde me cry with your returning story! ;A;

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Glad you enjoyed it. A few folks have pointed out that Chapter 2 may be unnecessary overall, but I wanted to give the story a properly written sendoff. The fact that most of my prereaders and editors didn't pick up on the big reveal in Chapter 2 was another reason.
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Who knows? After all, Twilight has had centuries to make whatever timeline paradoxes in her life.
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Mission accomplished also I AM SORRY.

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This is revenge over Bottle, isn't it?

Hello, a review to your story has been posted. I hope you find it helpful. :raritywink:

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