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I-A-M
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This is the purest thing ever what the actual heck
Like, this is it, y'all. This is how you write M-rated romance and have it be pure. Take notes cuz this is as good as it gets
Tonight-:
"around anything sip of her coffee"
"around another sip of her coffee"?
-And Forever:
"Despite its slow pace, I wait for it to grind its way down to the ground floor."
I'm guessing she's talking about an elevator, but as far as I'm seeing, no such antecedent for that "it" is actually given.
Very nice. As usual. :)
Probably the best Sunset/Wallflower love scene ever written on this site. Kudos! I particularly like how it's a genuine love scene and not just a lust or sex scene. This is what making love feels like. And the fact that Sunset voluntarily waits her turn at the end only helps prove it.
My only regret is that in the first chapter, I actually really wanted Wallflowr to describe Sunset abit more to Rosary when she asked. It's obvious that Rose knows something is "off" about Sunset (she did use an empathic geode afterall), but what'll Rose think when she finds out Sunset is a magical pony from another dimension who came over when dreams of domination?
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I consider I-A-M to be the finest writer of emotional romantic sex scenes on the entire site. It’s a pity the mature tag scares so many people away from his work.
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‘Their’ work. But thank you. I really do appreciate how much people enjoy my stuff, and I appreciate each and every comment. Thanks for taking the time to read my fluff
Another great SunFlower entry! Such a wonderful glimpse into their world. Thank you for writing this. If I might ask, please keep sharing your vision of their lives with us. Between yourself and Scampy, i can always count on you two delivering great stories.
Not going to lie this was so good and just pure dam. I really love sunflower and this has definitely been a great sunflower story arc.
I never read a Sex scene so pure in my life, but this was wonderful & we got a marriage proposal as well. Phenomenal job on sealing their relationship on a happy & bless note
The opening conversation, especially Wallflower talking/musing (through the prose) about how she views herself and her relationship with Sunset, was really strong. These lines from the narrative in particular struck me as insightful:
Really shows how much Wallflower has grown throughout this series. Such a great contrast to Air. Very nice to see.
Oh God, Rosary, no...
This is such an alpha lesbian thing to say (*cough*) but noooooooooo...
Ideal? Wally, I'm pretty sure Sunset's fantasies begin and end with you. I'm sure she would do just about anything in bed that you wanted, even something as degenerate as you thought I'd actually spell something out here? Haha gottem.
Okay, levity over. More seriously, I'm already liking this fic for how seriously it treats sex. Not just in and of itself, but what it means for Wallflower and her relationship with Sunset. Grouping it in with the other "things" (and certainly part of the "Big (Bad) Thing") that threaten to drag Wally down shows how much is tied into it. Fear, expectation, shame, anxiety... All very real parts of having sex with anyone, much less the first time ever being with anyone. It's kind of sad how few stories on this site acknowledge the emotional/relational significance of intimacy. I can tell this is going to be one of those stories that earn the Mature tag in terms of more than just physical action.
Rosary is just the best.
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I'm sure Rosary has some ideas...
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First off: That's probably one of the most on-brand expressions for Starlight Glimmer that I've ever seen.
Secondly, yeah, there was no other way to approach sex vis a vis Wallflower Blush except with the utmost seriousness. A huge part of how I tend to approach sex in general is as a way of exploring personal intimacy. I don't think I'm capable of writing 'just porn' because everything has to develop the character or the story or the relationships between the characters in some manner. There can be no wasted words. I'm really glad that's how that came across.
Also yeah. Rosary has gotta be one of my favorite OC's I've ever written.
As soon as I figured out that Sunset was planning on proposing I knew this was going to be great.
And:
This? This is what love looks and feels like. Bravo.
Damn. Rosary taught her good.
Me either, you bastard.
How dare you create something of such beauty!
Ooooof ouch owie my feelings
Also, Sunset, you've always been enough for her. Always. Methinks Sunset could benefit from therapy once in a while.
Okay, I would just have to quote so much of the story at this point that I'll stop.
Great is too small a word for this story. What suits it? I'm kind of at a loss. Fantastic? Spectacular? Phenomenal? Something else I could Google a synonym for? All of the above? I dunno. Just pick a good adjective and apply it to yourself and this story, because both earned it. Many times over.
Remember how I said I was thinking that this story was going to earn its Mature tag for reasons other than describing sex? Without a doubt, you accomplished that... and more.
The love scene—referring to it as a "sex scene" cheapens it—was one of those beautifully contradictory things I like. Very simple, almost tame, but carrying with it the weight and power of two years and countless moments. So much love and passion and walls knocked down and connections embraced and coiling and twisting and turning and union. Giving fully of oneself, to another. The ultimate act of trust. The reason a synonym for sex is intimacy. Sunset and Wallflower crossing that last bridge together, closing the gap at last. Two becoming one ("and she clave unto her").
And tying all of the symbolism and significance of this in with the proposal... What else can I say?
As a flamboyant homosexual, I must agree and say that this is chuffing top notch. Sunflower God indeed, Yammy. Well fucking (sorry I had to) done.
I'm gonna just take some notes on emotional and physical intimacy here, because, looking at my own attempts in writing, I'm lacking a certain spark. Wonderful as always.