This is the purest thing ever what the actual heck

Like, this is it, y'all. This is how you write M-rated romance and have it be pure. Take notes cuz this is as good as it gets

Tonight-:
"around anything sip of her coffee"
"around another sip of her coffee"?

-And Forever:
"Despite its slow pace, I wait for it to grind its way down to the ground floor."
I'm guessing she's talking about an elevator, but as far as I'm seeing, no such antecedent for that "it" is actually given.

Very nice. As usual. :)

Probably the best Sunset/Wallflower love scene ever written on this site. Kudos! I particularly like how it's a genuine love scene and not just a lust or sex scene. This is what making love feels like. And the fact that Sunset voluntarily waits her turn at the end only helps prove it.

My only regret is that in the first chapter, I actually really wanted Wallflowr to describe Sunset abit more to Rosary when she asked. It's obvious that Rose knows something is "off" about Sunset (she did use an empathic geode afterall), but what'll Rose think when she finds out Sunset is a magical pony from another dimension who came over when dreams of domination?

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I consider I-A-M to be the finest writer of emotional romantic sex scenes on the entire site. It’s a pity the mature tag scares so many people away from his work.

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‘Their’ work. But thank you. I really do appreciate how much people enjoy my stuff, and I appreciate each and every comment. Thanks for taking the time to read my fluff

Another great SunFlower entry! Such a wonderful glimpse into their world. Thank you for writing this. If I might ask, please keep sharing your vision of their lives with us. Between yourself and Scampy, i can always count on you two delivering great stories.

Not going to lie this was so good and just pure dam. I really love sunflower and this has definitely been a great sunflower story arc.

I never read a Sex scene so pure in my life, but this was wonderful & we got a marriage proposal as well. Phenomenal job on sealing their relationship on a happy & bless note

As soon as I figured out that Sunset was planning on proposing I knew this was going to be great.

It also stirs other, deeper feelings, but I push them away. What I sometimes want, and what Wallflower can do, are two different things, and that’s alright.

Because Wallflower is who I want, and that’s more important.

And:

Those words could keep me warm for a lifetime.

This? This is what love looks and feels like. Bravo.

It’s something very much like determination.

Damn. Rosary taught her good.

I can’t help it. I start crying because there’s no other outlet.

Me either, you bastard. How dare you create something of such beauty!

Tonight, and maybe forever, I’m finally enough for someone.

Ooooof ouch owie my feelings

Also, Sunset, you've always been enough for her. Always. Methinks Sunset could benefit from therapy once in a while.

Okay, I would just have to quote so much of the story at this point that I'll stop.

Great is too small a word for this story. What suits it? I'm kind of at a loss. Fantastic? Spectacular? Phenomenal? Something else I could Google a synonym for? All of the above? I dunno. Just pick a good adjective and apply it to yourself and this story, because both earned it. Many times over.

Remember how I said I was thinking that this story was going to earn its Mature tag for reasons other than describing sex? Without a doubt, you accomplished that... and more.

The love scene—referring to it as a "sex scene" cheapens it—was one of those beautifully contradictory things I like. Very simple, almost tame, but carrying with it the weight and power of two years and countless moments. So much love and passion and walls knocked down and connections embraced and coiling and twisting and turning and union. Giving fully of oneself, to another. The ultimate act of trust. The reason a synonym for sex is intimacy. Sunset and Wallflower crossing that last bridge together, closing the gap at last. Two becoming one ("and she clave unto her").

And tying all of the symbolism and significance of this in with the proposal... What else can I say?

As a flamboyant homosexual, I must agree and say that this is chuffing top notch. Sunflower God indeed, Yammy. Well fucking (sorry I had to) done.

I'm gonna just take some notes on emotional and physical intimacy here, because, looking at my own attempts in writing, I'm lacking a certain spark. Wonderful as always.