Love to right and watch MLP. Nuff said.
The Order of the Assassins. The best kept secret in all Equestria. Night Bringer had always heard legend about them but never expected for him to become one. He never expected to be pronouncing The Assassin's Creed with his own tongue. But he did. This is his story... and his legend.
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It's shaping up to be a good one
Take my thumbs up, a favorite and a mustached Spike 
The only thing that distracted me from the story was a few spelling errors here and there. Other than that however it was a very good start to what I hope will be a great fic
ME GUSTA MUCHO!
I can safely say that I'm looking forward to more.
Thanks to all three of you: for the encouragement and the first to review
Ok you see this comment? Good this means you caught my interest. Write or..
die you choice.. XD
Assassins Creed? this is going to be good, ill read it later, and we'll see if another piece of art if made...
Another great addition, however there is one thing that REALLY bugs me in any literature. You tend to use the wrong variation of "your" and "you're". This is just a personal issue of mine however. Examples:
"Don’t worry, your better now." and "All in all, your very lucky to be alive." There were a few more occasions where this occured too.
I hope you take this as constructive criticism rather than me nagging at you
Other than some slight spelling errors, this has been great so far and I'm really looking forward to seeing more. To answer your question, I would rather wait a week for a good, quality piece of work than wait a day for something that looks as if it were written by a 5 year old, you know what I mean? Take your time 
Carry on with the great work! This is shaping up to be an awesome story!
1176259 My thoughts exactly.
ME GUSTA MUCHO
furst lolollo
Gahhhhh nooooooo I didn't want it to end.
MORE. NOW. DO IT.
Shit's getting real.
NIce chapter. Can't wait for more!
Yes
Shadow is amazing. He's so cool and mysterious an probably the sexiest pony in all of Equestria. He probably gets all the mares! 
Anyway, brilliant chapter! This Is getting good now! I can't wait to see more of this!
Better hurry up with this story or you and me are gonna have a long exchange of words that don't even apply to this topic........................
Maybe.... Idk lol jk bout before :]
dat voice
GLORIOUS! I REQUIRE MOAR!
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I DEMAND MORE, MORE THAN YOU DO!
2190744 YOU WISH YOU DEMANDED MORE, KNAVE. I WAS THE FIRST HERE TO REQUEST IT SO OBVIOUSLY I WISH IT MORE.
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"WELL SOOORRRYY FOR NOT LOGGING IN AT THE SAME TIME AS YOU!!!
JUST BECAUSE YOU COMMENTED FIRST DOES NOT MEAN YOU AUTOMATICALLY WIN!! 
2190997 THAT'S EXACTLY WHAT IT MEANS SO COME LOVE ME AND LETS WAIT TOGETHER AND DEMAND FOR MORE!!
2191175 Can we cuddle?
AND YES! I SHALL WAIT ALONG WITH YOU WITH EQUAL, IF NOT MORE, DEMAND FOR A NEW CHAPTER OF THIS STORY THAT YOU AND I HAVE BOTH COMMENTED THAT WE DEMAND MORE OF!
2191230 Yes, we can cuddle
WE DEMAND MOAR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
2191240 i'll get my blanky
DO YOU HEAR THAT MOONSHINE9012!!
WE THE COMMENTERS OF YOUR STORY THAT THOU HATH POSTED REQUIRE MORE OF YOUR GLORIOUS TALE!!!! 
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> THOU HAST DEMANDED MOAR?!?!?! I SHALL GIVE THEE MOAR!!!!!!!
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Also, here's five out of five mustaches for the argument:
Can you please give us back the voice of nights head!
Wouldn't be surprised if noteworthy ended up being a Templar.