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BrawnyBold


Is it wrong to think Cadence is best princess? Is it wrong to think Feather Bangs is best pony? I certainly don't think so.

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The CMC had no idea what went wrong. Cozy Glow ended up failing her test and Twilight blamed them for what happened. The CMC start to accuse one another for teaching Cozy the wrong things and it resulted with them ending their friendship. The Cutie Map detects this and sends Twilight and Cozy to make things right with the CMC.

Author's Note: This is not a sequel of Forgiveness Denied. This is more like another take on an alternative ending to Marks for Efforts.

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This sounds like it makes even less sense than the other one.

Scootaloo and Sweetie Belle still need to apologize to each other though

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None of the accusation fics for this episode make any sense. Twilight literally did what any reasonable authority figure would have done and people blow it all out of proportion because they don’t understand the concept of an apology gift.

Why are all the alternate endings to this episode poorly written and poorly executed with so much bad grammar to boot?

I still don't get what was so horrible about this episode that required so many people to scribble out so many fix fics in such a hurry. Twilight did apologize! She just did it in a "Show, don't tell" sort of way. And the CMC clearly got the message! Actions speak louder than words!

Great work! You hooked me into the story and kept me there; that's a hallmark for me! Love your stories BrawnyBold!

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The problem with the episode is that there are literately several witness that can collaborate that the CMC were in fact teaching Cozy how to be a good friend, if Twilight had actually bothered to put in any work into investigating.

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Problem is not every one reacts to those apologizes the same way. Fact of the matter is by dealing with the CMC the way she did, and blaming them for something they didn't do (in a apparently not so enclosed environment) she not only committed a injustice against them, but also impugned their character, and a lot of people would've liked to see that record set straight in a more formalized way, especially considering that's what the old Twilight would've done.

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Ouch. I agree bud; this one was nonsensical, mainly as it makes the same mistake most accusation fics make; the accused is given no chance to protect themselves.

There's still the problems that the CMC have between each other that they need to resolve.

And when it comes to apologies, especially after rejecting the first one, doing one in public in front of the entire town and making a spectacle of the thing is a bit of a dick move. The CMC weren't given an apology, they were held socially hostage, where they would look like dicks for rejecting it.

Not bad... Not Bad... (You could even write a story of Twilight making good on her threat-- making sure the CMC don't hang with her students as simple friends, which can really cause confusion, really make people angry, and really make her feel guilty when she learns the truth)

I will still never forgive Twilight for what she did (Judging the CMC without hearing them out) Matter of fact, this may be mean of me (But I bet loads of you feel the same way)

Marching straight into Twilight's office (Maybe kicked the door open) shoving all the papers off her desk right in front of her, glare at her and sneer, "I ought to kick you clear into orbit for what I just saw you pull!"

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I'll explain to you... (Not trying to change your mind, just making it clear)

The reason is many people are so angered is because of Twilight's attitude and banning the crusaders

1: She knows them better than that (True, the CMC have done some crazy things before... but would honestly think they would do something like make one of her student's fail on purpose?)

2: She just chewed them out without giving them a chance to explain themselves, and just judged them like that.

3: A Princess of Friendship, and Headmare of the School of FRIENDSHIP, isn't one of the lessons of Friendship "Not to judge, and hear both sides of the story." No, she just ignored all that, assumed the worst, and banned the CMC from her students and her school like that-- literally kicking every friendship lesson she ever learned or taught out the door.

...Now, True, she made up with the CMC afterwards, but that still doesn't cut it for some of us. We know Twilight is sorry for making her mistake, but MAKING IT in the first place... well... that's where she went wrong... VERY wrong!

So we all make fics like this to show what happens when she REALIZES her error (She's feels guilty and more drama ensures) And sometimes, some people are so enraged at Twilight's mistake, they'd like to see her suffer for it.

That's pretty much what these fix fics are for... "Revenge."

I feel like Rarity, AJ, and RD need to calm down, because I feel like they would have probably done the same thing.

Just when I thought people couldn't dramatize this episode anymore 🤦‍♂️

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How crazy is the CMC... How they jumped on a priest during the funeral? Or how they unleash chaos itself (Discord) hmmm... New plot CMC got away with it. Also the fiction seem alright to me.

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well, in their defense, their intention is never malicious.

10332444 I have to agree. This isn't repentance, this is manipulation.

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