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Sunset and Twilight’s story as they graduate college and navigate the rest of their lives together. How they explore the world, make lives for themselves, and stick together through thick and thin.
Warning: The cheese is strong with this one.
Marking this as canceled but it does have an outline of where it was going, as well as a playlist in the final chapter.
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Cuuute!
Oh goodness, Flurry's such a little brat. Then again, most of us were at five, so I don't think that's to be unexpected.
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Well in Equestria she's a princess, so the brattiness is to be expected
That was really cute! Though I do admit it's weird seeing real life locations, lol. I feel like Shining could have handled Flurry better than hitting her, however lightly. I also feel like Twilight hiding the wedding from her mother is just asking for hurt feelings.
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Velvet is the type to take over and plan the wedding the way she wants it, but Twilight doesn't want her to do that. If it were up to her Twilight would be wearing a white dress getting married in a church and we both know that's not how Twi wants things
Mmmm cheese balls.
Loved it
Can't wait to see how he next chapter goes
So can we expect the next chapter maybe tomorrow?
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Who knows. I'll get around to it. Definitely not tomorrow tho.
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Darn it was worth asking though at least not even gonna guess Saturday or Sunday
this story gave me diabetes
it's so sweet! can't wait for the next chap!
And so the girls are in on the secret. They're behaving themselves quite well.
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Yes they are
Now it's just the matter of Twily's family finding out. Let's hope Flurry can hold her tongue
Spolier: She may not; I'm not quite sure yet
On a sidenote, I am so unbelievably excited to write the wedding! I have it all planned out and ready to be written, I just have to write chapter 4 first, which i'm not so excited about
Hope nothing bad happens to twilight and her decisions in the next chapter
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We'll see. I'm definitely struggling writing it, so it may take a while. I'll hopefully have it done by Friday, as I really want to starting working on the wedding in chapter 5. I might even make the wedding two parts, but idk.
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Well good luck with that
Need more fun side stories of ring hunts! I was told to find a claddagh and was like, "you bet!". Theeeeen had to go find what the hell that was. Still, love the character interactions. We should all be so lucky to have a circle of friends last so many years.
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Oh, believe me, their vacation is going to be full of shenanigans (THEN THERE'S THE WEDDING, AND THAT SHIT GOING TO BE EVEN BETTER!!)
This was a nice cute chapter!
thank goodness for your author notes, i was hoping their plane wasn't going to crash on the way home in the next chapter, cuz that would be awful
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That never even crossed my mind! I try not to be an evil author, I could never imagine hurting my babies like that when they're so happy. But now that you mention it, that sounds like a great detour...
Cuties! Poor Twiggles and her anxiety about her mum finding out and going momzilla on her wedding.
I'll make sure it come back on Monday to see the next chapter
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I already have it written and it'll be ready to go on Monday for sure! It's just a short interlude, but I'm proud of it. The first part of the wedding with be out on Friday!
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Can't wait
you totally had me fooled, i thought they had actually died. i never expected you would go with my random though last chapter lol i'm honoured
I had a feeling Sunny was having a nightmare, but its still disconcerting to read. Still, I'm glad they got back in one piece.
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I tried not to make it too obvious, for example pitting the dream in italics, but considering we still have 13 chapters to go, it's kinda obvious they didn't die.
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Your comment had my mind reeling! I had never thought of something like that before, but I loved writing this chapter, especially when I was busy all weekend and didn't have much time to write.
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i'm full of good ideas. if you ever want to pick my brain just message me :D
Last chapter didn't show up in tracking, for some reason. It was really cute! And I figured this chapter would be based on the comments of the previous one, lol.
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Idk why it didn't show up, maybe just a glitch, but I update every Monday and Friday between 12 pm and 8pm central time, so check back then for new chapters! I got really inspired by Sunset_Shimmer83's comment like I said and reworked some things, and I'm proud of how it came out!
This chapter sure shocked me when reading it
Animation at Hasbro?
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I did say this was getting meta. Sunset works as an animator on Littlest Pet Shop for Hasbro, but she won't for long.
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I love that, lol
Woah, that strip club scene came out of nowhere, lol.
(Though, uh, seriously, it might be best to bump this up to a T due to that)
Glad to see everyone's having fun preparing for the wedding.
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Even I was 't quite sure what was happening there. This whole chapter was written in like an hour and honestly could fall under the 'crackfic' category. I had no idea what to do for a bachelorette party, so I kinda just phoned it in.
I'm not sure I'm going to change the rating. I feel like the scene was super small and really undescribed.
The one time we went to Vegas I skipped the strip club scene, some of our group went. Instead we went out to eat after the cab driver "went the wrong way" while the meter was running.
Twiggel's getting fitted for her dress was too adorkable. So cute.
I have feelings about Las Vegas, but I understand that it can be fun. Glad the girls are getting a chance to cut loose before the big day.
Wait did I see a forth wall joke?! You have blessed us all
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Wait where? I don't remember putting one in...
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It's a troll
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ah, okay
D'awww. I'm so happy for the girls. That was really precious.
Quick question: is Canterlot City supposed to be in California?
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Yes it is! Since they live near a beach and always seem to have warm weather, save for Holidays Unwrapped and the 2014 comic, I figured it might be somewhere in Northern California.
Really enjoyed it and wasn't expecting to see Sunburst, Starlight (surprised their both a thing and sunburst is Sunset's brother), Sunset's parents, and princess twilight. Also glad you showed their outfits under and their beautiful
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Love Story us a sequel to Fading Sun!! They take place in the same universe. That's where the comment about Sunset being a princess came from in the last chapter. So yeah, he's her brother.
At least someone appreciates the images! I had so much fun picking them out.
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Why thank you and for the info