In Another World

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Emotion Nexus

Emotion Nexus #1 · Jun 23rd, 2020 · · · Prologue: Part I ·

I like this.

I like this very much.

Gonna need an editor, but overall very good. It's like seeing Changing Odds again for the first time. Familiar, yet new.

Melody Brush

Melody Brush #2 · Jun 23rd, 2020 · · · Prologue: Part I ·

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I spent the last few days working on this story with a premium Grammarly active, so I could get it as clean and neat as I possibly can, although I think I'll just stick with the free form to keep an eye on the critical errors.

Master king

Master king #3 · Jun 29th, 2020 · · · Prologue: Part I ·

This was a awesome and interesting beginning I can't wait to see where this will go.

Master king

Master king #4 · Jun 29th, 2020 · · · Prologue: Part II ·

This was a fun first meeting with most of the main six.

Melody Brush

Melody Brush #5 · Jun 29th, 2020 · · · Prologue: Part II ·

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I was gonna do what I did last time and skip ahead two years, but it would've worked that way, so I extended the prologue. Glad you're liking it so far.

Master king