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Tomislavj5


Greetings ! It is nice to meet you. I'm your regular 18 year old kid who plays games and watches anime

Comments ( 44 )

This was a epically interesting beginning can't wait to see where this goes.

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Thank you for the feedback and I'm glad you like it :D

This is awesome :pinkiehappy:! I hope this story keeps going on! Keep up the great work you do!

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Awe thank you so much for your support. It means a lot :twilightblush:

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Your welcome :twilightsmile:! After all, it is our job as readers to give out our best support to great stories when we see one. And trust me, this will be a great story in the making :pinkiehappy:!

Great chapter today! I liked how you did the fight scene, it was pretty awesome since I noticed some lines and attacks similar to that of a game and video that I remember watching :pinkiehappy:! Hope you keep up the great work!

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Thanks so much! Your my first supporter so far. Your comments make me write more chapters :twilightsmile:

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Really! That’s a first, but I’m glad that my support is helping ya make new awesome chapters! It’s really rare to find crossovers like this one! Hope it goes on for a long while!

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Oh you don't even know the half of it! My brain filled with so many ideas that Im dreaming my next chapters :yay: Next chapter will have an Easter egg and I want you to figure out what story from fimfiction is it :moustache:

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Ohhhhhhhh :pinkiegasp:! A challenge to see if we (The other readers) can figure out what cross reference this “Easter Egg” is! I like it, can wait to see if we can solve this little challenge in the next story :pinkiehappy:!

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That little easter will drag out through the entire story :trollestia:

"I remember yes. Let's just hope that one of these Realm destroyers won't come to Equestria." Celestia said as Luna nodded.

Jinxed

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Dang it! Sorry that I was late to respond to this story but I was being busy with some things. And also, the moment that you described the character. I instantly knew who we’re talking about! It’s Daniel Blaze! from Equestrias human Spirit! :pinkiehappy:! I loved that series and was one of the few stories I’ve read first when I first came to this website! Also, great chapter, I really loved the crossover of Daniel and how you did like the first three chapters of the series in Tomz P.OV! Hope to see if their is a possibility of a chance that will let the two meet each other in the future! Keep up the great work!

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I'm actually planning on doing that but I have to get permission from Shadicbro pony first. But seeing his busy with college I don't see that happpening so soon. :ajsleepy::fluttercry:

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Really, tough luck. At least we can only hope that he will accept it. By the way, are you planning on having a fight scene with Daniel? Just curious because we’ll their was one time that Daniel fought another person from a different equestria.

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I'm still thinking about that but I think they will clash against one another yes. Since Daniel is so protective over his friends and Tomz is doing many things for his own amusement than anything else. But I think they will fight one another yes. They also both have different believes when it comes to their fighting style. While Daniel fights his enemies with respect and honor. Tomz is....another story so to speak. I will make a chapter about his past and what made him the way he is now.

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Hmmmmm, now that just peaked my interest for what future chapters will look like! And figuring out Tomz past will make it much more interesting! What will the future hold I wonder! By the way, just curious but where in the timeline in Daniels Equestria do u plan to have the two meet? And by that I mean will you have Tomz meet Daniel when he discovers he’s powers, where he’s at he’s lowest, or will you let them meet when he’s harnessed some of the elemental fire dragons power? Just saying in case if ya didn’t know what I meant :twilightblush:.

Is it just me, or does the battle moment inspired by one of the scene in Hazbin Hotel?

....So... Many....CROSSOVERS! first, you made a crossover of undertale, then with equestrias human spirit, then did a hazbin hotel, then finally! Said a line from MY HERO ACADEMIA! Good God, how many crossovers do u plan next!

HAhahahahah Nice. Equestrian Human Spirits. I am a huge fan of Shadicbro Brony. I submitted 2 oc's to his story. Nice nod

.... so..... many.... anime’s.....! The fact that you made I think 3-4 crossovers of anime’s that I have forgotten the name of them, makes this story so much better and unique! Also, great music choice, really loved it and enjoyed listening to it while reading! Hope you make more soon! :pinkiehappy:

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I'm very glad your enjoying this stoy. I thought that you will write something about Tomz's personality and I'm glad you enjoyed the music as well

Okay, let's see if I got the anime in this chapter right:
1. Darling in the franxx
2. RWBY
3. Monmusume
And then we have Undertale. I don't know the first one, League of Legends?

I lifted her head so she could look up at me. "Smile my dear. You're never fully dressed without one"

Good show friend

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Indeed my good fellows this is a hotel hazbin reference,my finest moment is reference here too

Huh...... never expected a crossover with that anime. But it just makes me more excited to see something more unexpected things! I think it was called konusubo? Don’t remember how to spell it. Also, it’s really funny to read! Glad you updated and sorry for my late response :twilightsheepish:!

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Its fine, don't worry. Have you seen my Warframe Story?

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Just saw it and it’s good so far! Really like it! Shows promising potential!:pinkiehappy:

Are you going to finish either of your stories, both stories are good, so are you?

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Im working on that. Im stuck on how to continue so any ideas and/or suggestions will help a lot

"Juicy and sweeter, unlike Spike's pancakes" WAIT juicy. What kind of pancakes are you eating

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I probably misspelled that. English isn't my native language

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I think the word you were thinking of is fluffy not juicy

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