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Silas5399
Just another guy that writes and games as a hobby
Silas5399
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1. The grimm
2. Them
3. I'll let that one speak for itself
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😂
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I needed this in my life
9946535
The plural for grimm is just grimm or the grimm
9946977
Ok I'll try to fix that
9947002
You might want to fix the description also
I have a few problems with this story so far
1. Tons of grammatical errors, especially in the first half
2. Lots of forced exposition
3. Slow it down a bit, your not in a speed writing competition. Basically, fix your pacing
Other than that, story is pretty good, but I do recommend getting an editor
9950983
Sorry for that when I get a sudden burst of insperarion I can't write anything else till I wrote a good bit of my new insperarion
More more more we need more super chocodile
Cool take your time.
GOOD
lovely
The Winter Emperor theme
More ice and cold jokes.
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lol
10064175
this story has the crossover tag but the description does not say, so what crossover is this?
Why did he loses weapon
10069532
It's a RWBY crossover
Oh I am Loving This Story so Far
69th person to like it fu*k yeah
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sorry to keep you waiting for so long
What's "the we9lrd?"
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where did you find that I must have missed it when I was looking over it
Oh I am so glad I had Ed leave a chibi here. Only one other story has actually made major use of them and even then t was transformed into a red parrot renamed Blaze. Still a major contributor to many side projects for the MC though but still nce to see someone actually majorly making use of these little guys and their capabilites.
Yessssss!! The story is still going!!!
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Yea...really been awhile since I saw any other story's with chibi ed's
I stopped at chapter 3 because this story needs some minor editing work, it has potential but grammar and word placement needs work.
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I'm gonna try to work on that now that I have Grammarly on my computer, I don't think I had it when I first started
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and did you read the AN
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It’s in the synopsis of the story. This should help
Please respond to this comment.
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fixed thank you for pointing that out
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Ok
Why is it so cold. *FNF 'shit no' starts*