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This story is a sequel to Off-Color
The last few months have been a journey for Rainbow Dash. She took an abused filly off the streets, got hospitalized after trying to defend her, and ended up adopting Scootaloo with Twilight.
But while they aren't together at this time, will the trials and tribulations of raising a foal together make them closer?
Only tagged sex for sexual humor. No sexual acts occur.
Cover art drawn by RayneTheSkunk
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I like seeing it from Twi's perspective. Can't wait to see what happens to this little family next.
Ahahahah, I knew there will be another sequel
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I'm probably not gonna stay in her perspective, but I am going to write it more. It seems to flow a bit better for me for whatever reason.
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I can't help it. I love writing these three so much
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That's cool. I meant about the story in general though, not just Twi's perspective. I just thought it was a cool idea showing the same scene from Twi's POV. Still, can't wait!
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I probably won't be pumping these out every day like the original, but they should still come out pretty often.
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That's fine. I get that.
I enjoyed this second recap. As for a different one-shot book, I think it should depend on the number of ideas for them you have. If just one or two, you could add them in here as filler chapters. If more than that, you might want to look into a separate one-shot book. And totally loving Twidash. I'm not exactly a fan of the ship but I admit they're adorable together.
Twidash ks awesome, as for the side stories, I agree with Melody Song, depends on the number.
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I already have like five ideas for one shots so I guess it'd be smartest to make it a new story. Works for me! Glad you all are enjoying the story! I used to be adamant on not writing romance but this is actually kinda fun.
And we're off to season 5! I like the opener, and that we'll be officially seeing both Dash's and Twi's parents sooner than we did in the show. Can't wait to see what happens next while the mane 6 are gone!
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Well technically we did see Twilight's parents in season 1, but yeah, I get you. Shenanigans will soon be afoot.
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And I cannot wait to see them
Is this story related to this song?
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It is not. But that is a bop.
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Should be within the next two chapters.
I love stories with scootadopt! They're always so heartwarming.
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They're my favorite too!
Shame half the ones I find are unfinished and from like, seven years ago.
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Cool
when I get woken up by arguing
it usually meant dad was home
That sentance switches from present to past tense. It should probably be:
*Fortunately
*were
* I am either
*but
* oblivious
* exactly
* us
* confidently
Also, maybe it is just me but "imprinted into me" feels akward.
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Jeez, I definitely need to re-read my chapters more before posting. Thanks for all the help.
Yeah, imprinted was kind awkward phrasing, but I was kinda trying to insinuate that like some animals, dragon babies recognize the first creature they see upon hatching as their mother. Like ducks or whatever.
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No problem. There has been a significant lack of adoreable TwiDash Scootadopt recently, the least I can do to repay you for correcting that, is providing a second pair of eyes to look for errors.
Also I thought that was were going with that but would that not be "imprinted on me" or something like that.
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Well I appreciate that.
This was a great chapter. I like the slight implication that The Cutie Map already happened-though I'm a little sympathetic already for Rainbow in Tanks for the Memories. Can't wait to see how meeting the parents works.
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Oh Tanks for the Memories (prob next chapter) is gonna suck for Rainbow. But this time she has a not-wife and Scootaloo to help her deal with her shit.
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True enough. I like the new cover art, by the way.
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Thanks! A buddy of mine from the FimFic Discord commissioned it for me. I thought it was super cute too.
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Cool.
This story will never fail to amaze me! The dialogue is well written and not robot-like.
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That's always my biggest concern considering how much of my stories are dialogue. Glad to hear you like it though!
You have a real talent for warm and fluffy.. Enjoying thus greatly... As for recovering pony toward the end... -staring intently- if Thunder tries again for Scoot... -growls menacingly-
Meeting the Parents. The thing all fictional ponies fear. And all readers LOVE.
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Well thank you! And that mysterious voice may or may not be him. Lets just say I have plans...
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I'm gonna make the meeting with Dash's parents excruciating for her. Everyone else will love it.
* do
Great chapter by the way. Can't wait to see more.
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Oh shoot, how did I miss that?
Thanks! Working on the next chapter right now!
Aww, that was a really good way to write Tanks for the Memories. Having Scoot be the one to break it to Dashie was a good idea, even if it means we lack the Fluttershy character growth (but this isn't the actual show so it doesn't matter). Can't wait for the next chapter!
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Thanks! This chapter has been the bane of my existence for the past few days because I kept starting at it and not being able to continue.
Hopefully the next chapter will be out sooner.
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It's perfectly understandable. So, I assume Lost Treasure of Griffonstone-or a follow-up to it-is next?
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).
Nah, I'm not touching that episode. Partially because it doesn't really impact the plot, and partially because I haven't seen it. Next episode is probably gonna be them going to visit Twilight's parents and getting all that started (with a little hidden surprise during their stay in Canterlot
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Ah. Can't wait to see what that little surprise is.
Another awesome chapter by an awesome author! Keep up the good work i’m cheering for ya
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Thanks!
* cares
* fell
* princess's/princess'
"a distraction happened" feels off to me. Personaly I would use "a distraction ocured"
* out
* taking
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Oops.
Thanks for the assistance!
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Glad to be of service.
Aww, a little bit of fluff goes a long way. So cute, I bet she wakes up again to find herself wrapped in Rainbow's wings.
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Nah. Not that night. Though at some point later in the story Rainbow will be initiating some cuddling.
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I'll look forward to that then, the tough Dashie cuddling up to Twi. Still, great chapter.
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I can't wait till they are in love, hehe
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We still have a bit of character progression and a side plot to wind up first, so it's not like it's gonna be in one of the next few chapters. But it will be worth it.