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Cinders of War


Even now there are only embers, and man sees not light, but only endless nights... - Dark Souls

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This is a remake of Hero for Fun by Georgdoza


Georg Filipe Mendoza was living everyday life as per normal, until an eventful trip to a costume convention. After purchasing himself a pair of Saitama replica gloves, he finds himself in Equestria and eventually, the human world from Equestria Girls, plus, he somehow gained all of Saitama's powers, at the cost of something great.

He meets Rainbow Dash and the girls and learns to acclimatize to a new life in a new world, at the same time, protecting it from monsters that threaten to end his new home. Having zero hero background, Georg has to learn what it takes to be a hero before he can become the unassuming hero from nowhere.


I was asked by Georgdoza to try out a remake for his story and so here is my attempt. I do hope I'm doing this story justice. While it doesn't have the best of grammar, the idea of it surely is interesting and entertaining enough. Do let me know what you think!

PS, I added the subtitle so they can be told apart.

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 9 )

OK. Not a bad start. I just got one thing to say.

ONE PUUUUUUUUUUUNCH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Nicely written, I can't wait to see where you take it. :)

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Haha, thanks y'all. Anything I can do to make it better?

I like! I think is better then mine because, it is flowing better then what I can have because my english is not good but, trying! Will be niced to see more!
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How come you me have more rating than this one? You say my Hero is 8 of 10 this you say 7 of 10

Oh god that’s funny XD

He lost his paints and his ‘new’ wig

Are you to add of more here soon?

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Sorry, I don't think anytime soon, haha. I've been super busy. Plus, I've still got some stories to work on too that need priority, haha.

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