After destroying the Star-Forge, and narrowly escaping after killing his former apprentice Darth Malak, Revan spends a number of years exploring the empty reaches of the galaxy. Unfortunately, after an encounter with an Sith Remnant ship, the Ebon Hawk is shot down into a mysterious land of colorful creatures.
Crossover with Star Wars KOTOR. In the new, re-edited version, it is now incorporated into the aftermath of KOTOR, when Revan leaves to explore the galaxy alone.
Looking for someone to draw me some cover art.
Chapters (4)
2681050 Yay indeed.
Aww no companions? Nice work on the re write. I liked the other but I can already tell this one is going to be better. Look forward to the next
-Toast
2681394 I'm gonna eat you.
2681397 Without butter!? How dare you!
2681407 Did you know that lobsters are essentially immortal, and only seem to die from external causes. It's too bad they taste good with butter.
(I never said I planned to do it without some kind of topping...
)
2681394 Also, I never said there wouldn't be companions...
2681414 Hmm lobster on toast...
Edit: Companions... now you have my undivied attention good sir... I look forward to the next chapter
OMG! YAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAY!
2681587 Well, aren't you happy.
2681731Uhhhhhh, I mean good work, keep it up.
(Looks around room, proceeds to do happy dance)
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Or what species they would be.
Currently he is alone though, so I'm guessing there won't be any Kotor companions.
Pony companions possibly? Or maybe something else entirely.
I read the first iteration, and I think you're doing a great job so far.
2682386 Thanks man. Feedback really helps.
2682439
It's no problem.
I agree with rewriting it.
Revan came off as uncaring, he was way too OP, way too ready to harm an unknown species for simply holding his light saber, and other things like that.
I'm not saying those things ruined the story, but it did feel weird.
2682473 To answer those issues, He'll probably almost as much OP here, but with less theatric effects. He IS an extremely powerful jedi. But I'll make him work for more of what he has to do with the force and fighting.
Uncaring because neutral force alignment.
Lightsaber thing was totally BS, I agree.
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The misperception about "neutral" is that they aren't good or evil.
What it really is, is the combination of doctrine. The willingness to use power, and make sacrafices when needed. The compassion to help those in need. And the perception to understand the difference between when mercy, and retribution are needed.
Jedi = mercy
Sith = vengance
Neutral = Justice
Some who live deserve death, and some who died deserved life. (half quote of Gandalf)
2682592 I know, but that was just in the original I made him uncaring.
That's one of the main reasons I rewrote it, because I wasn't properly representing him.
Thanks for all the help though, even if I've already pretty much straightened things out.
2682615
Oh.
2682674 But seriously, this was fun.
2681414
According to Wikipedia (I take everything I read on the internet with a grain of salt)
Leading scientists theorize that immortality will be attainable in a few decades.
I personally want this to be true, my greatest dream is to live forever.
Of course knowing how these predictions go, it won't happen.
2682879 Yes. A few years ago they theorized that they would actually be able to clone dinosaurs. That was a real thing.
(Also, that living forever thing might happen. There have been numerous studies, and we actually know what causes human aging, just not how to stop it.)
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If they did find the solution, I'd probably wait a few years so they could work out the kinks.
2682919 Yeah, probably.
You could've at least brought HK-47 with him
2688602 *cough cough* hemightbecominglatersoshutupanddon'ttellanyone *cough cough*
2682511 I just hope you don't make him a doormat. Him being OP is damn normal since Equestrian magic isn't really strong
2692100 Noep, no doormat. But I am going to make things more realistic.
You might wanna read this first
2695190 I don't get what you mean...
2695190 Would you care to elaborate?
This looking to be much better than before.
While I only have a limited knowledge of the Star Wars universe I definitely have more than most.
So this is awesome! The first one was a little confusing.
2697533 Thanks for the feedback!
2753527 As it should be.
2754421 Till the end of time.
Oh god. Can it be true? A crossover with one of my favorite Jedi/Sith in all of time? You, sir, have my interest.
2948802 RainbowBob? Here? I must be dreaming... Anyway, I'm sorry to say this but you won't expect many updates on this for awhile. If you want more info, check my second blog post: "Well that was interesting..."
I saw a really infuriating Jedi/Pony story, and decided I wanted to make one....
But then I find this, same jedi, nearly the same time.
And it is good, but I feel like if I started on it, it'd sort of be, well, 'copying'.
So I'm gonna wait for 'permission'.
And then, to comment on the story; Wtf no mention of Bastillia. He was forced to leave her behind with child, and holy crap nothing.
And that's just about my only issue, sense the canon is that He and Ordo initially set off to find the grave of the mandalore, after which Revan set off for the empire.
Oh wait, one more; T7. What did you do to T7. You are a monster for not bringing him.
Anyway, I like the story besides those two errors of mine.
I think it'll be great, even though updates will be far and few.
Edit: T3-M4, I meant. Not T7. T7 is from Swtor, silly me.
2950226 You don't need to ask my permission, by any means. As for Bastilla, I never knew that, I might find a way to incorporate that into the storyline.
As for HK, I quote my comment from earlier.
EDIT: I feel like an idiot, you said T7. He was meh. I might incorporate him.
I hate to be a nag but... when can we expect an update to this story? I mean I just found it, so I'm not trying to rush you or anything, I'm just a tad bit curious.
3055902 I refer you to my blog post. And it's quite okay.
Revan is my favorte Sith/Jedi. So whens the new chapter?
3062663 I refer you to the comment just literally below the one you just posted.
(I'm not trying to be rude, if I'm coming off that way)
3316439 Hmm. Mind telling me what you liked about it?
3316575 Feels gud mang.
3366796 Refer to my blog post...
It's alive!
6254304 Indeed it is.
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3367287
And now you are back.