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stillstartrekn
love ponys pinkie is best pony, world of tanks, elderscrolls an mechwarrior
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now this is my 1st story an I would like to know how I went at getting the character right and if this is entertaining enough to continue
6:00 - Dream Theater
1135503 i have one question cuz i haven't read it yet. is that Toothless in the picture?
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Spelling errors abound and characterization is a bit muddled. It's not BAD per se, just not very good either... You may want to get a proofreader to pick out little errors. "Angle" and "Angel" need to be switched, "There" should have been "Their" and various other things... A proofreader would have helped you immensely.
Please work on spelling.
Other than that its a great story plot and execution!
This Story is now 20% Cooler!
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nice so far, im interested, by the way your using "an" in the wrong places, you use "an" before most words that start with a vowel and you use "a" before most words that start with consonant here are two examples:
an eatery
a dragon
1140291 yes it is, it is just so awesome!
thanxs for all there critique cant make it better with out you guys
Interesting so far. Is this a crossover with that series of novels about dragonriders in the Napolionic Wars Era? (Afraid I keep coming up broke before can get any so I'm not familiar with the name)
1598560 that is the basic idea yes, but like evolution dictates each area of the globe dragons have evolved differently an with cross breeding there are a multitude of set an mix breeds
still haven't found an editor please dont go crazy if there are grammar mistakes english wasnt my best subject