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Mocha Star


I'm here to write my way into your hearts and infect your minds.

Comments ( 16 )

Pretty sweet. The queesadilla thing was ultra confusing.
I think you missed great memes of Rarity reaction to Twilight dripping jizz all over her store :p

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Thanks for the comment. That scene was supposed to be, glad you felt that way; mission accomplished.
:trollestia:

Twilight had to take a bite of a quesadilla and swallow it to get her relief during her session with 'yellow', 'white', and 'green'. However, if not for the one time the word quesadilla was actually used, she could just as easily have been blowing the other stallion's cock with all the deliberate innuendos.

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I thank you for recognizing the clearly convoluted ambiguous innuendos I used.
:yay:
I hope you got something out of the story beyond that and that you stay awesome in everything -and one- you do.

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I mean, I got a good read out of it. Does that count?

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Yes, it completely does.
I also noticed my editors botched the punctuation when I read it over for myself yesterday, so I'll have to fix that.
Thanks a ton, your comment is like petrol in a auto-mobile that travels eight hectars on a single sploor.
In other words, it's special to me in ways you may not understand and I appreciate you and the comment you left me.

Twilight whimpered at the choices. In front of her; it was hot. It was practically dripping, and she could smell everything. It brought back curious thoughts from being a filly and seeing mommy and daddy, even Shining with one in their mouths. The creaminess it seemed to leave and the strands connecting the pony to the object…

Oh god, it's that cheese thing she's afraid of! :rainbowlaugh:

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:moustache:

Only person to comment on it; thank you for that after only a couple short months.

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No problem, you had an awesome build-up to it.

Dang, you're right, this is a new CTS story. Nice. :twilightsmile:

this is pretty good, I normally like a little bit more build-up before the sex comes along but this is alright

This was really good! I honestly felt this version of Twilight getting into a relationship within the society is better than the original Clocktower storyline with Dr Horse! Great job!

Are there plans to continue this story, cause I'd totally keep reading ^^

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Yes, actually. I just have so much on my plate and so much going on right now that a lot of my fav stories are falling to the background. :pinkiesad2:
But, thank you so much for the comment and compliment, it means so much to me.

This was a lot sweeter then I though it was going to be. I was pleasantly surprised. Great story bro

This hits all my fetishes but from the opposite gender. Well done!

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Thanks. I might even continue it given how I ended it.
I really appreciate your comment.
🌼

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