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... "The vault dwellers are stuck there fighting Discord as an attempt to save there pony comrades." Change it.
Vault hunters, my friend.
1131938 sorry about that. just did saying that line made me think of fallout.
but its good just changed it to Vault Hunters 
STD....You must mean LSD. I couldn't complete reading this due to the many misspellings and wrong wordings. I will give it another shot when edited.
1132015 got it. just changed it.
Great cover image, can I ask who did it? Or did you get it on Google or some other? Oh, and you might wanna do a spell/grammar check on the description. Wrong things in just that alone can scare potential readers away.
1132095 not sure if he made it or not didn't really look but here is the url http://browse.deviantart.com/?qh=§ion=&global=1&q=mlp+borderlands#/d4tlpg3 and ill check the description for anything that might give readers the wrong analogy.
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Cool, and uh, I'm feeling nice so before anyone rips into you for having messed up on the description, here's a revised one I did just now.
The Vault Hunters took a bus that was supposed to take them on a return expedition to Pandora, because Brick had forgotten something back at the Vault. But in it's place, the bus ends up stopping in Equestria. They concur to set out for the fortune there, and try to make the best out of a bad situation. Nothing goes according to plan and everything turns to shit when Discord ends up breaking free again, declaring war and chaos on all of ponykind. He brings forth a team of some of the Vault Hunters old foes. The Vault Hunters are stuck there, fighting Discord to save all of of Equestria.
A Borderlands Crossover.
1132154 that works better then my idea so thanks.
You're in desperate need of an editor, and Twilight and Spike were pretty OOC, which is a shame because this is an interesting premise.
Try again.
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No prob, you're very lucky this was a Crossover adaption of something I beat. In honesty, I'd probably give you a critique had this been any other genre. I go easy on Crossover writers because I love Crossovers and HiE, so I'm a nice guy to people who write them and help them as much as I can. Self-Inserts and Clop, however.......you'd be shocked at some of the comments I leave on bad stories. But still, good adaption. Not too many people take on Borderlands. But since you named it BroniesLands, the main enemies should be bronies, lol.
I'll just leave you alone now, I don't want to take up your entire comment section.
1132177 i cant find anyone who be willing to help.
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I can take a crack at it if you want, but you'll have to revise the story a bit if you want to fix the OOC-ness.
1132185 ya i tried to adapt it as a crossover and also based off the picture. i never seen an actual good borderlands crossover so i decided to take it on hope to make a good cross over.
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I gotta say this when you use the bird for Mordecai. It is always with him (The game could only limit it to a degree but lets say he keeps it in a special Tech Bag/Cage until it wants to get out and fly around some or he uses it for battle [Wonder how the ponies will react to it]). Roland's Turrent is something similar to the Commando in the 2nd game so that is easier to explain then saying it materializes out of nowhere.
1132202 okay
i could use the help 
1132220 i should of probably say they have an equipment bag with them.
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Let's continue this in a PM before we flood the comments, then.
okay
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Knowing Pinkie and the 4th wall breaking skills she has (Have her pop out of it at a random moment which confuses the shit out of the Vault Hunters). If you need any OCs take a look over my vast blog (I didn't really make much on evil but could be mistaken for evil on just appearance [I have over 30+ OCs to choose from]). If you don't find one you need just give me some specifics and I will add em to my blog after some thinking.
1132298 yea there is going to be A lot of fourth wall breaking in this Fic but it really doesn't confuse them i mean there are humans in a pony world mostly the ponies will be confused.
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Be it ponies or humans the majority of confusion can be rooted to characters like Pinkie (They confuse everyone).
hey guy's chapter 2 will be in production soon but there is something i need help with. im going to add apple jack and the others in but i seen how Applejack talks but how am i suppose to write it down. i never really understood that. Her dialog i never really knew how to write. so anyone have any idea how im suppose to write her lines down? that be great if ya help
this looks like it'll be a interesting story
1132015 Did it really say that? Jesus Christ... I can't stop LAUGHING!
1134757 Agreed. However the grammar is appalling. Great concept and writing. Shite grammar and spelling.
Oh shit! Discord is free and it is up to the Vault four to save equestria! Tune in next time for the next installment of Bronies
Lands!
Thanks for the wait now finally, chapter 2 is out ill keep you updated on chapter 3. Thanks for the wait and have a great afternoon.
P.s. Tell me what needs to be done to the new chapter, if there is some grammar issues. Your help will be most appreciated.
Okay, a LOT of I's are for i's
your writing style is a tad different from what i'm used to and it threw me off at first, although i do believe i'm liking this.