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TheClownPrinceofCrime


Every day is always crazy!

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This story is a sequel to The Dark Knight Falls


Three years after the departure of Batman, Twilight Sparkle is trying to discover her unique way of being a new princess after she becomes an alicorn. However, a tragic event cripples the lives of her and her friends. With the new threat rising up in Equestria, they have no way of surviving without their hero. The Dark Knight must find a way to triumph over his enemies, new and old, as he prepares for the ultimate final battle of Equestria...if he returns, that is.


Note: This takes place during the events of MLP: FIM: season 4 episodes 25 & 26: Twilight’s Kingdom and after The Dark Knight Rises.

Chapters (25)
Comments ( 134 )

Oh no. It's Bane! D:

Great chapter!

Is Bane literally going to fight his way to be Tirek’s second in command?

Is the magic of the world going to heal his face?

Is Talia going to make an appearance?

Great chapter and I see Bane is here.

But what will happened to Thorax?, since Queen Chrysalis and the changeling subjects are dead.

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Talia will make no appearance. Bane will look for more answers as he continues to seek.

Thorax is the only survivor. He will later appear in this story.

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I see.

There's no doubt my mind Thorax will be devastated.

Hey, wait, no! Foul! Foul! Bane should be dead...right? WHY IS HE HERE?!

Also, should I be concerned at seeing Fluttershy's name listed?

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It will be revealed later how he got there. Love your dramatic reaction. :rainbowlaugh:

Yes, of course.

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To be fair, I thought he'd find his way to Equestria during the events of the third movie. :rainbowlaugh:

Welp, I better be emotionally prepared for a broken Pegasus.

Wonder if other MLP’s rogue gallery might appear...

...yes, I will gladly take any form of Selina Kyle meeting Fluttershy. DCAU, Arkhamverse, Nolanverse......maybe not Halle Berry...or Burtonverse but that's for...other reasons.

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You think that she will knock some sense into Fluttershy?

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Hopefully non-violently but...yeah. Then again, I've no idea how Flutters is after performing a Harmonic Brutality with her friends.

“Probably. As long as they don’t run to ally ways, they’ll be fine. But it’s best to keep the rest of the earth in the dark about it. I’m proud to know that Gotham never broadcasted their knowledge of the pony world.” Bruce said.

Possible foreshadowing? If so, will it make things worse?

Is Fluttershy still having memories of of being Discord’s executioner?

Is Scootaloo going to make an appearance?

So Joker is apparently Voldemort.

How will Fluttershy rise up from all of this? Will Bruce Wayne and maybe Selina Kyle be able to help her?

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One can only hope...for a hope that will not vanish.

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Ah, so the Digidestined are also getting involved.

The Mane Four and Spike slowed their walk behind Twilight to begin their new discussion.

“Has anypony seen Fluttershy today?” Spike asked.

“I did not. I hope she is all right.” Rarity replied.

“Speaking of which, how come she didn’t come with us today?” Rainbow asked.

...wait a minute...

Early in the morning, the Mane Five and Spike arrived at the Crystal Empire from the train ride of Ponyville.

...which is it? Four or five? :rainbowwild:

“Does it have something to do with her prominent role in Discord’s grisly execution three years ago?” Pinkie asked. Her mention of the tragic incident made the others lower their heads somberly. “What is something I said?”

...Pinkie never could read a room, could she.

“Yeah, good thing we cremated his body after Batman killed him.” Rainbow smiled.

...and that this version of Bats doesn't involve the Arkhamverse.

“I always think about what I could’ve done...to (sniff)...spare his life. I was...so...(sniff)...consumed by revenge and anger for what he did. I’ll...I will never forgive myself for this!!” Fluttershy cried.

“How can I call myself an element bearer of kindness if what I did was...unkind. I-I-I do not deserve that title and responsibility...(sniff)...at all.” Fluttershy muttered. Moments later, she closed her eyes as she was tired from her extreme sorrow all day and barely ate anything.

Around midnight, the Element of Kindness on the Tree of Harmony started to slowly crack and lose its color.

...I'm sure that's nothing...right? :applejackconfused:

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I put “Mane Four” meaning Rainbow, Pinkie Pie, Applejack, and Rarity minus Twilight in that paragraph since since they’re talking behind her back.

It’s Mane Five, meaning with Twilight in the train. I hope that’s clear.

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Indeed it is. Thank you.

Now please...fix Fluttershy.

Bane’s second chance to take down Gotham and to avenge Talia is upon him.

Are the Mane 6 and other ponies going to Gotham as well?

Will Bruce and Selina return to the home that they left behind?

Should the surviving members of The League of Shadows side with Bane and Tirek on their upcoming reckoning?

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Bane doesn’t know that Talia is dead though. He might find out later.

Very nice.

But Poor Thorax, he is devastated for the demise of his brother and the others changelings.

Great chapter!

How will the Mane 5, Spike Celestia, Luna, and Shining Armor react to Batman’s “death”?

By “gaining recruits from every place in Equestria”, does that include Ponyville? If Ponyville is included and this is a silly guess, does that include Fluttershy?

For Canterlot, should they gather corrupt nobles or politicians like Blueblood?

This chapter look great. Bane had met Tirek after all.

But who's the Lurking Phantom?.

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Dear goodness, that guy Blueblood...if Bane wants to recruit that idiot, Blueblood should really hope he doesn’t screw himself up...which I’m sure he will.

Great chapter!

The Phantom could either be The Joker, Discord, Ra’s Al Ghul (though you said that he wouldn’t be in the story), or The Phantasm.

Good chapter!

What will Fluttershy do now? Will she become an Equestrian threat and perhaps a threat to Gotham?

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Perhaps...remember the domino effect. With one element gone, I fear what will happen to the rest.

...good news, she's not physically destroyed. Bad news, everything else related to her scene.

Great chapter!

Is Thorax going to disguise himself as a human?

Great chapter!

Are the dragons and other no-pony races going to be part of the revolution as well?

...why do I feel like you could create an army out of Rainbow's rivals alone?

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The more vast the army becomes, the more ferocious the revolution will be. You will see more.



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A daring hero will breed daring rivals. The headstrong ones always attract chaotic minds such as mine. Trust me...this won’t be pretty.

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...at what point should I fear for Fluttershy's safety?

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Oh you’ll see...it’s when things get more interesting...with Gotham’s Reckoning.

Great chapter!

Is Bane going to overthrow Tirek for Thorax’s sake?

What does The Phantom have in store for Fluttershy? Will his identity be revealed soon?

Later in the evening, Fluttershy trotted to her hometown Ponyville. At that moment, her attitude and behavior were completely different from what they were before which defined her character. With her Element of Kindness vanquished from her heart and personality, she was then depressed, angry, and moody. She coldly passed by the bewildered critters on the road and ignored their calls of concern.

“Forget about kindness. Forget about love. Forget about FLUTTERSHY! She is now...dead.” she contemptuously moaned.

She kicked back the twigs and dead leaves on the ground and angrily stomped on the blooming flowers on the grass. Then she resumed her walk to the town.

Greeeeeaaaaaaaat...she's gone FlutterCruel.

In other news...could...could Bane be going soft? Is that a possible path through Thorax?

Unbeknownst to them, the Lurking Phantom slithered around another skyscraper next to them just below them. As he viewed them, his smile grew larger which displayed his sharp teeth. “Goooooooddd...now, time for my rendezvous with the yellow pegasus. She’s in for a big surprise.” he hissed, slithering away till he disappeared.

...if that's who I think it is, he's gonna wish he was dead.

Wondered if the bugbear may be a reminder or an Easter Egg that in Bane’s childhood-he had a teddy bear...

You’re welcome! Though, I didn’t mention Trixie. Thanks for the special thanks credit though.

Great chapter!

“Hmmmm, do you think he is hiding something from us? If that’s the case, then I’m going to that forest and have a talk with him—find out what’s going on.” Clavicle decided as he flew off.

“Wait for me! I want to skin more animals while you’re at it!” the hybrid yelled, running after him.

Big mistake!

Great chapter!

Is The Phantom Sombra? We’ll just have to wait and see?

Wonder what the plan is for Flutters.

“It can’t be...” -Older Bruce Wayne (Batman Beyond)

That was something! Talk about apocalyptic!

Now, how to deal with Fluttershy? Has she turned into the next Nightmare or the next Discord?

Also why throw the chest aside? That’s going to bite you in the flank later on!

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Fluttershy is her own villain. Her reasons and motives will most likely drive her.

Good eye on the chest. It won’t be the last time we see it here. :raritywink:

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