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TheClownPrinceofCrime


Every day is always crazy!

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The Legion of Doom have finally learned the spells that can activate Grogar’s Bell. As they seek to absorb its great magical power, they experience a whole series of unexpected events that completely frustrates them and nearly drives them insane. It is a day that they did not expect to happen.

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Not gonna lie... I briefly laughed. I sure love good comedy like this.

TBH. Let's face it. Discord should have done something like this.

What a twist. At least Discord should have sought chaos amongst evil in this comedic way.

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Yeah. I can totally see him doing this. :rainbowlaugh:

Comment posted by Mystic Sunrise deleted May 12th, 2020
Comment posted by TheClownPrinceofCrime deleted May 12th, 2020
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In description "Cozy Glow"

I like this. Cool twist at the end. Slight grammatical error concerning dialogue.

“Very well. I hope it works this time.” said Chrysalis.

There should be a comma after the word "time". When there is a dialogue followed by the said tag, there should be a comma, not a period. Hope this helps.

Your stories are always so much fun!

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Awwww, thank you! That makes my day. :scootangel:

They got trolled:rainbowlaugh:

:rainbowlaugh: :rainbowlaugh: :rainbowlaugh:

This is the funniest story I've read in a while! You're a true master of comedy!

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Why thank you, my good friend!! I am truly flattered!!

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Well, what can I say except... YOU'RE WELCOME! :pinkiehappy:

This is how things should have went with Discord and the Legion Of Doom.

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I whole-heartedly agree with you.

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I agree with you, buddy.

And thank you.

When I saw all of that wacky stuff, it has Discord written all over it.
Wonder if the bell they got was a fake this whole time or did Discord found out and swapped the real bell with himself disguised as the bell?

Well, at least here, Discord realized his 'plan' had gotten out of hoof. Still, what did he do with the real Bell?

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