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Enclave2277


"Did you try setting it to Wumbo?"

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I will definitely keep be following this.

So Gilda is German in this story. Not sure how I feel about that. I don't hate it, but I'd like to know why.

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In my headcanon, Griffons in the EQG world are the equivalent of Germans.

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Interesting. I've actually heard a few people compare Griffonstone to America.

Cute interaction between these two.

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I just rewatched some of the scenes in Griffonstone and they give me more of an Himalayan vibe. Would be fitting for birds.

Sombra as an artist. Interesting choice. I like it.

Very interesting and makes me eager to see the next chapter.

Poor adorably stressed out Coco.

I’m not sure you’re using the colon mark correctly. It’s not supposed to be used when listed items are incorporated into the flow of a sentence. Here’s a link to a site that explains how it works.

Not sure what the point of an erection-prevention hole is if one gets an erection anyway. I guess this is what counts for fanservice in this fic :P. Even so, it's the only complaint I have about this chapter, and it's a minor one at best. Looking forward to seeing more! Some excellent, small worldbuilding :).

A very well written story with lots of buildup and character development. That said with all this buildup I'm starting to expect the other shoe to drop soon. Have been since last chapter.

However with how things have been going thus far, this story is starting to feel more like a power trip fantasy type of story. Nothing wrong with that either if that's the direction your going for. I've come across more than a few good Power Fantasy stories. For instance, an anime called "That Time I Got Reincarnated as a Slime" is a really good one that I'd certainly recommend watching.

Either way I can't wait to read more.

always love a good nudist rarity story never enough of those

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Thanks. But you make it sound as though there's a lot of stories to compare it to. :duck:

It's so refreshing seeing a technically sexual but so mild fic, and presented in a very normal and almost humdrum way. Thank you for not cramming fifteen progressively more disgusting deviantart fetishes into your work, Enclave.

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Thanks. It was my goal from the very beginning to make Braeburn/Rarity's relationship realistic.

It's wise for them to take it slow.

Having seen what happens when said powers are abused firsthand (Sunset Shimmer came to mind), I always made it a point to never take them for granted or flaunt them openly in public.

I realize this isn't the point of this story, but that's an intriguing sentence.

I really have been enjoying this story. I look forward to more.

i never liked eqg because of fact that they have massive heads and really ugly models

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In any EQG stories that I write, I always try to give the characters more realistic body proportions. The same goes with any commissioned works.

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A lot of writers and artists do this with the ponies too.

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To be fair, her canon job is making clothes. I actually find it bizarre that pony Rarity spends most of her time naked, to the point where I applaud the finale for changing that nearly as much as I do for the blatant Fluttercord.

I think that's the first time I've seen Tempest/Trenderhoof before.

Loving EVERY chapter! Can not wait for more, phenomenal writing. Thumbs up and favourited. 👌

SHE’ll DESTROY HER!! Er, I mean, ‘him’. 😝

Okay unexpected twist. But how did those two even get down there?

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Rarity's vision occurred thousands of years ago when sea levels were lower.

Loved the recent chapter for this story. Love to read more chapters.

Ahh yes, I see you are cultured as well

Stacy's mom has got it goin' on
Stacy's mom has got it goin' on
Stacy's mom has got it goin' on
Stacy's mom has got it goin' on

Stacy, can I come over after school?
(After school)
We can hang around by the pool
(Hang by the pool)
Did your mom get back from her business trip?
(Business trip)
Is she there, or is she trying to give me the slip?
(Give me the slip)

You know, I'm not the little boy that I used to be
I'm all grown up now
Baby, can't you see?

Stacy's mom has got it goin' on
She's all I want
And I've waited for so long
Stacy, can't you see?
You're just not the girl for me
I know it might be wrong but
I'm in love with Stacy's mom

Stacy's mom has got it goin' on
Stacy's mom has got it goin' on

Stacy, do you remember when I mowed your lawn?
(Mowed your lawn)
Your mom came out with just a towel on
(Towel on)

I could tell she liked me from the way she stared
(The way she stared)
And the way she said
"You missed a spot over there"
(A spot over there)

And I know that you think it's just a fantasy
But since your dad walked out
Your mom could use a guy like me

Stacy's mom has got it goin' on
She's all I want
And I've waited so long
Stacy, can't you see?
You're just not the girl for me
I know it might be wrong but
I'm in love with Stacy's mom

Stacy's mom has got it goin' on
(She's got it going on)
She's all I want and I've waited for so long
(Waited and waited)
Stacy can't you see?
You're just not the girl for me
I know it might be wrong
I'm in love with
(Stacy's mom oh oh)
I'm in love with
(Stacy's mom oh oh)
Wait a minute
Stacy can't you see?
You're just not the girl for me
I know it might be wrong but
I'm in love with Stacey's mom

Whatever you do don’t give us that crappy season 9 Twilight ruling Equestria garbage.

I wasn't expecting Rarity to be a crystal pony but it makes sense.

“Before we begin the thaumatic testing phase, I need to conduct a preliminary investigation. Essentially, a list compiling all of your known abilities, so that we can get an accurate picture of what we’re dealing with. All in the same of safety and science, of course!”

“Name” not “same”

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A bit but would have been cool to see a unicorn crystal pony

Any sex scenes that I need to know about?

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Between dragons? No, I don't plan on writing any of those. Otherwise, you'll have to be a bit more specific as I don't know if you're commenting on this story as a new reader or you're just asking about Chapter 12 specifically.

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I wanted to do something a little different this time around.

Another fantastic chapter, keep up the great work.

I leaned over and kissed Coco’s forehead. “It’s quite alright, darling. I completely understand. There have been days where I’ve wanted to do nothing more than rip my hair out and scream at the top of my lungs like some crazed lunatic. Is the tea helping at all?”

I call that Monday :ajsmug:

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