The adventures of Rarity Belle: an aspiring jewelry maker & lifelong nudist living in Manehattan.
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Very nice, and funny too.
Poor adorably stressed out Coco.
I’m not sure you’re using the colon mark correctly. It’s not supposed to be used when listed items are incorporated into the flow of a sentence. Here’s a link to a site that explains how it works.
A very well written story with lots of buildup and character development. That said with all this buildup I'm starting to expect the other shoe to drop soon. Have been since last chapter.
However with how things have been going thus far, this story is starting to feel more like a power trip fantasy type of story. Nothing wrong with that either if that's the direction your going for. I've come across more than a few good Power Fantasy stories. For instance, an anime called "That Time I Got Reincarnated as a Slime" is a really good one that I'd certainly recommend watching.
Either way I can't wait to read more.
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Thanks. But you make it sound as though there's a lot of stories to compare it to.