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After many years of heart break, sadness and hopelessness. A Young man discovers new meaning in his life after he finds Pinkie abandoned, alone, and without a home. (based on My Little Dashie)

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WALL
WALL OF TEXT

MLD spin off, giant walls of text, grammar errors.

Dear Celestia, this can not end well.

PresentPerfect
Author Interviewer

Please learn how to use paragraphs properly.

Also, how to not write stories derivative of stories that are not particularly good.

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This is a rude and inappropriate thing to post. You should be ashamed of yourselves to bag on someone who shares his or her work.

I've seen worse.

Oh good, I was worrying I wouldn't be able to use this today.
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to be fair what you've actually written isn't all that bad, just got to learn how to use those paragraphs. better luck next time, eh?1117230

oh! And you've got to come up with a bit more of an original concept

1117112 Yeah, except this is bad. So no, none of us should feel ashamed. You should feel pity for him and his bad story, but I will not be ashamed for saying this is garbage. This is garbage. See?

1119063
Let me add the following:

At least have the decency to comment with more than a picture, anything else is just not helpful.

1119577 Man, sometimes, a story isn't even worth the time it takes to point out and make corrections. This is one of those times. Sometimes, the only way to get the point across, is to just shout it out. This is one of those times. Anyway, like I was saying, yeah. He gives us a wall of text to read, we give him a comments section full of gifs and pics to look at.

OK, I'm all blue from reading this. :rainbowderp:

If you are going to butt hurt by this then be on your merry way. I'm not trying to be original in any way. I simply just used pinkie instead.

1124087 Yes we know, that's why it's bad.

That guy's a total douche. I would've either went with her or made her stay

Naw, I got shit to do.

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