After the birth of their foal. Rainbow Dash and Pinkie Pie become a family. That is until it is foalnapped.
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I'm going to be honest, two things scared me away from this.
1. You misspelled birth. In the description. Immediately.
2. Two mares can't have a foal?
a few words.
1. What's a "birht"?
2. WHO THE FUCK IS RED DAWN?
3. How did Pinkie Pie get pregnant?
4. This was too short.
Good aside from these points. You earn a like.
Your punctuation confuses me. And your writing skills have declined since the last chapter.
Who's Abyss?
also wtf is up with Trixie
"Rainbow Dash and Pinkie have their first foal."
Seems legit.
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Welcome to the world of Fanfiction.
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1) Yep.
2)Magical lesbian spawn.
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Well...
Crotch boobs...
To the writer.
WHY?
This is good.. read the other storys.. and use common sense to figure these things out guys. stop disliking.
953609 Yes they do you idiot.. there called teats. How else would they feed there babies? Ponies have nipples, or teats.
1116928 thank you finally
Applebloom and the rest of the crusaders where waiting. They were in the clubhouse waiting to hear news from the search for Angel Cake. "I can't believe it, we were trusted to look after Pinkie and Rainbow Dash's foal, and she gets kidnapped." Scottaloo said.
"Well, um.. Applejack do you to be my Mare?"
Improper grammar and name spelling error
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HOLY SHIT THAT WAS DAMN NO FUCK YOU TRIXIE YOU LITTLE MOTHER HOE FUCK YOU HOW DARE U FUCKING TSKE THE BABY AWAY IM SO GUCKING PISSED OFF RIGHT NOW HOLD THE GUCK ON WHILE I READ MORE HOLLY SHIT
About fucking time! OH HELL YEAH ASSHOLES TAKE THAT TRIXIE YOU SON OF A BITCH
now gotta get Angel Cake to the mothers 
lets keep reading this
LOL RAPED NOT RAPPED
and after all that she still wnats to date her! Holy shit, man! The wackiness in this book never fucking stops. Oh my god, I fucking love this shit. Fuck you hoes that disliked this, this is so good 
WHAT THE FUCK!?!? COME ON!! THIS GOOSE CHASE IS GETTING UNBELIEVABLEY RIDICULOUS COME ON WHO THE HELL IS NEXT!? DAMN YOU FUCKING TRIXIE HOLY SHIT IM SO PISSED OFF RIGHT NOS
TWILIGHT IS PRENGNAT!? HOLY FUCK YOU CANT HAVE HER GO ON THIS CHASE ANYMORE THAT AND THAT LITTLE BITCH GOT ANGEL CAKE BACK OF HELL FUCKING NO I SWEAR THIS ENDING BETTER FUCKING BE GOOD
ARE YOU FUCKING KIDDING ME!? NO RED DAWN COME ON MAN HANG IN THERE BRO!! GUYS GET SIME FUCKING HELP, TWILIGHT USE A FUCKING SPELL!! HOLY SHIT AT LEAST THE BABY WAS RETURNED BUT THIS IS NOOOO
Ahem, sorry for those comments i get very into book
Anyways I rate this 8 out of 10 stars. I am going to give this a like and a favorite and will recommend this to whoever is into fucked up kidnappers. Overall this story was great! I fucking love the drama, I swear this shit got me going. Guys seriously read all this shit before judging. But fix your grammar, man. Shit I have bad grammar but when you make different characters soeak make new paragraphs for them. But still pretty easy AT LEAST FOR ME to read! I enjoyed it and this is all I have to say in this review. Holy mother of god, may the lord be with you!