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Tholamas
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I liked it
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Thank you kindly.
Titles do not have full stops.
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Ha! Force of habit, thank you.
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No problem.
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or look into call the souls back and put them into new bodys…...
“Many foolishly believe immortality to be a gift...when it is in fact, a curse. Happiness can never truly belong to ones such as us, and many are consumed. Rage, hate, malice, insanity, or some other reason, many get consumed. Rare are the ones with the will and heart to endure such a curse. Even I myself find myself asking what the point is. I am one of the lucky few who have a true purpose to keep me anchored when amongst mortal beings. Pity those who are immortal...for only Time, Fate, and Destiny can tell if they will endure.”
Excerpt - Crimson Chronicles
(Still in Writing Process)
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An excellent story that shows and tells the immense difficulty and struggles of being immortal. The above excerpt is one from a book I have been writing. I believe it is a fitting quote.
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You have my thanks, I'm glad you liked it.
ELYSIUM.
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Thank you kind sir.
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Your Welcome.
this sounds more like a wish twilight would have rather than something that would happen honestly
celestia is far too powerful to be killed so easily. she literally cant die lmao, only contained
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I know, right? Or better yet, use her time-scrying spell to copy the souls of her friends from their bodies right before they die, or detach and move them right as they're dying -- as long as it can be a closed time loop, it ought to work. At her level of power, she could make her own afterlife.
Damn, this was dark... very nice work
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One question, though:
Did Twilight literally blow everyone up here (but herself, of course)?
So those celestial body's and emotions is what keeps the princesses alive? Interesting concept.
So Twilight killed everyone? Without the sun, Celestial died, without the moon, Luna died, without any ponies left to live therefore no more love so Cadance died, but magic is still left, there will always be magic as it flows through the universe, so Twilight will always be alive until the end of time? Maybe even after that?
So what was Twilight's goal here? Just kill everyone on the entire planet and then be the only one left? What purpose does that accomplish? Why does she have a problem with living forever if she is just gonna choose to live forever with nobody else around her? Ya this doesn't make much sense.
Congratulations Twilight you basically became a god! Now you live in endless suffering and torment by living forever alone.
Oh yeah also with those who believe immortality is a curse, it depends on how one views immortality, it really depends on those around you or how you spend your eternal life that either makes it a gift or a curse, what if for an example an immortal fell in love with another immortal? That would be eternal love as you would be spending your eternity with someone else, what if everyone around you was immortal? Than you could spend all eternity with friends and family.
Not saying immortality is a good thing but to be honest I wouldn't complain if I was immortal, I mean first off I don't even have any friends so nobody to moarn, and if i was immortal than that would mean i would have all the time in the entire universe to do anything, being the smartest in the entire universe, being the richest, use immortality as an advantage, advance technology that would take centeries for any mortal to accomplish, it really depends on how you view immortality, being immortal could actually benefit all those around you, maybe with all that time one could even invent immortal for others to become immortal with you.
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Twilight stated that she's seen the passage of ages and epochs. This indicates that she's able to manipulate time. By using her own control over magic she was able to sever the connection that the alicorns had with their respective celestial bodies and concepts thus enabling them to die should their bodies be destroyed.
The beginning scene as she's sitting on a desolate world and the information presented means the more you think about it the worse it becomes. She can transport herself to any point in time and yet now she sits at the end of the world. Why? Well, perhaps this was the first time she witnessed the supernova of the Sun. Or perhaps it's the octillionth.
Maybe she recreated the world or rewound time to its beginning to see it pass again and this is the end of one of those possibilities. Or more over it could be one of the numerable divergent timelines that she is seeing come to pass. The more you think about it, the worse it gets. Perhaps she's lived the same life or innumerable permeation there of, or one of innumerable other possibilities.
As far as one's definition for immortality goes, I largely agree. With an infinite amount to learn and forever to accomplish such an endeavor, then an immortal's schedule from day to day would be rather full.
P.S Twilight wasn't exactly sane.
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Ahhhhh, ok now the story makes a lot more sense, thank you.
Celestia cursed Twilight....without knowing it. Twilight needs a TARDIS....NOW !!!!!