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bronypanda


just a brony that loves to read. I'm known for my descriptions drawing people's attention and curiosity :)

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I wonder if it's funny.

Hmm... Not half bad. Gave me a few good chuckles. I noticed a few missing apostrophes throughout the story... Otherwise, not half bad. Well deserving of a rate up, I suppose.

Damn that must be one good sammich

Never stand between a Stallion, and his Sammich.

LOL! I loved every word of this. You definitely get a favorite and a thumb up.

heavy, how do i make sandvich?
all you have to is take a cup of flower, add it to the mix!
next take a little something sweet not sour, add it quick just a pinch,
making these treats is such a cinch just add a teaspoon of balonay!
all you have to do is count to four and you never get your filla!
sandvich!
so moist and delicious,
sandvich!
im coming for you!
sandvich!
sandvich sandvich sandvich!
:pinkiecrazy:

First thought: Lol, pony sexism.

It's a cute little story. Keep at it, man.

"Get Back in the Kitchen!"

*sad music as Cadence sulks to kitchen*

Revelling not revealing
pegasi not pegasy
and wiping not whiping

Otherwise a great little one shot. Just how it should be, short and sweet. :pinkiehappy:

Amusing. Would benefit from proofreading, though. Way too many "Shinning"s.

1113655>>1113620
Ehh true and thanks:twilightblush:

heavy, how do i make sandvich?
all you have to is take a cup of flower, add it to the mix!
next take a little something sweet not sour, a bit of salt, just a pinch,
making these treats is such a sinch just add a teaspoon of balonay!
all you have to do is count to four and you never get your filling!
sandvich!
so moist and delicious,
sandvich!
im coming for you!
sandvich!
sandvich sandvich sandvich!
And thats how you do it this is an edit of someone elses who did it wrong ._.

Scratch that >:3
Cadence, how do i make sandvich?
all you have to is take a cup of flower, add it to the mix!
next take a little something sweet not sour, a bit of salt, just a pinch,
making these treats is such a sinch just add a teaspoon of balonay!
all you have to do is count to four and you never get your filling!
sandvich!
so moist and delicious,
sandvich!
im coming for you!
sandvich!
sandvich sandvich sandvich!

Like a startled baby bunny?:rainbowhuh:

OH how the great fall SO hard!:rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

1114009\thank you for the corection :rainbowkiss: i knew i did something wrong

masterpice :')

Huh, not nearly as crackfic-y as I thought it was gonna be. Still nice though.

My god this was so cheesy! You've made giggling painful!

Loads of grammatical errors though. You need the assistance of a proofreader.

this made me hungry

Me while reading this fic:

Honestly, he takes pride in this sandwich more than he does his job. There was this really embarrassing time we had lunch with my aunt Celestia.... She had taken alot of time to set everything up, displayed alot of delicious foods but the only thing Shining had on his plate, 20 sandwhiches that I call Shinning Sandwiches. He absorbed each one like oxygen. My aunt got a little curious by the time he had 6 left, and asked to have a bite to see how great this "Shinning Sammich" really is.

She chewed slowly with a raised eyebrow. She looked towards me with a puzzled look that said, "This tastes like any other sandwich out there". Before she could say what I knew she would say, I coughed and pointed my pupils in Shinning's direction and winked. He just sat there, overly enjoyin' em, completely oblivious. She got the hint and played along, finishing the rest of the sandwich ferociously making Shining Armor gasp in horror.

"You said just a bite"! He yelled before covering his mouth with his hooves.

My aunt smiled a wicked grin as I realized that she had found a new way to mess with Shining. She belched very unlady like, stunning everypony and yelled back, "How could I just have ONE bite of this sandwich! I must have more"!!!

Hearing her words, Shining Armor quickly gathered his remaining sandwiches in his hooves and made a run for it, my aunt chasing him laughing meniacally, but before she left the room, she glanced back at me and winked. My aunt Luna merely facehoofed and we both laughed. All that just to protect his pride and his sandwiches . (chuckle) Here ya go Shiny! One fresh Shining San-whoops!

Poor Shining XD :trollestia:

I WANT SOME OF THEM TAAAAAAAAAASTAYS!

Please allow yourself to have a cookie if you understood this reference.

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