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Just daydreaming...

When you're so close but so far from the one you love, all you can do is daydream..

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bronypanda

bronypanda #1 · Nov 7th, 2012 · · ·

Omg... I cant believe i did this....

"Eyeing a looking"

Should be

"Eyeing a necklace"

Brony of Truth

Brony of Truth #2 · Nov 9th, 2012 · · ·

I just got

Edit: "Eyeing a looking" you should probably change that to "Eying a necklace" Eying, not Eyeing.

Briianz

Briianz #3 · Nov 12th, 2012 · · ·

This was...Holy crap. An awesome fic. I could relate to Soarin'...at least the beginning part anyway and not the part with the thunder storm. The ending had me confused though; I had to read it twice just to understand it.
There wasn't any "Comedy" in this fic, you might want to consider removing that tag.
So, yeah, this was well-written...Good job.