What started as a simple match between brothers in a fighting game, a portal appears on the screen of their TV, sucking both of them into equestria and separating them! Will the two brony twins survive and regroup with eachother to defeat the challenges laid out to them? first time making a fanfiction, along with some help =) So feel free to give your opinions on it. Teen for swearing and other stuff.
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interesting.
do proceed my good sirs
I COULD TOTALLY CLOP TO THIS
WHEN IS THERE GOING TO BE A CLOP SCENE? Jk. Das nasty
lyra is cool
ya i ask the same question as SmokeyStar, "WHEN IS THERE GOING TO BE A CLOP SCENE" i didnt buy these lyra plushies for nothing
If I were mark, I would have let lyra just take me. But other than that, The story is interesting so far. And i did notice a misspelled a word in chapter 2. I am really looking forward to see the outcome of this story.
Fuck!!!!!!! The freakin chapter I had ready just fucking resetted!!!!!!
And I do this on phone lol
uuuuum no offence but..........COULD YOU HURRY WITH THE NEXT CHAPTER ALREADY!
There you go fellow bronies enjoy
(Though it's a bitch doing this on phone
)
Yay! A new chapter!
Seems like Mark and Matthew are victims of Murphy´s law... I kinda feel bad for them.
But wait, you wrote all of this on your phone!? Wow!
Yeah, but in the end, it's all worth it.
Smokey like.
Read the new chapter. Wonder whats next hmmmmmmmmmmm.........
this is relevant... TO MY INTERESTS
Jus wonderin.....what do y'all thinks gonna happen?
They are never gonna make it out alive.
Hey, I'm always wondered...who's older? Aloe? Or Lotus?
Hello everybrony, I have bad news, I left my folder of magical ideas at another house.
, so I think I might be able to get it back in the weekend. Here's a small sneek peek for your troubles, enjoy.
Just a distance away, Mark was still inside the dustkicking brawl, now including Rarity, Derpy and Berry Punch.
*CHOMP* "aaaaAAAAH!!! YOU FUCKER!!!!!!" (Reference lol)
*CHOMP* "Ow! My hoof!!"
"OOPS!!! My bad!!!
Clop scene? I think yes!!
from reading clop to this. WTF HAPPENED!!
pulse of the night:http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gBofXG9EvOg&feature=plcp
you have peeked my interests
You've peeked my clop
I bet their gonna get their asses handled by the princesse's
Oh just wait lol it's funny what we have in store.
Gonna post now
You wanted to know my opinion on the story..?
Well, I think it's really funny! Keep it up!
One thing though, you should try to avoid textwalls.
Alright I'll try thanks
How many chapter will there be?
A shitload
Lol yea right now we're in production of the next one.
Everyone who reads this story should read my story.. I smell COLLAB.
Ur damn right jimmy
Alright sorry for the long bucking wait. Here's the new chapter, postin now.
Right after Thanksgiving
Noo! Rarity!
Gilda! :D
For a minute there i got quite excited because the end of the chapter seemed like it was heading towards a inappropriate scene.
But other than that, I think you need to review this chapter slowly because i noticed 5 spelling errors. There may be more but all i saw was 5.
still in development of the chapter lol we apologize for the long wait, but due to the lags on the phones it won't be out for a while. all i can say about the story though is that shit will go down with gilda on the next chapter. (I'm Mark in the story)
I have not read chapter 4, 5, and 6. So I'm just gonna pretend I red those chapters and skip on to chapter 7. Becuz Im a boss that got a 26 killstreak with an LSAT...AT HIJACKED
1920445 omg I ahm yer biggest fan!
I have a feeling I'm going to like this. But first, a quick question. Do you have an editor?
This remind me of Gravity Falls
.....
3189764 No sir. we have been uploading using our phones so, we cannot see if there are any typos
3191486 I don't know that show.
3199020So no computer at all?