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Fluttershy, one of Twilight Sparkle's friends, ends up having a strange dream one night, and the next day, she turns to Twilight to see if she can help. She, unfortunately, is unable to figure the dream out, but knows three Princess' who might be able to help, including her new Sister, Cadence. The three arrive, and offer to help in any way that they can, but when Zecora demands to be involved, they allow it; she seems to know what's going on.

So when they arrive at the Canterlot Castle, Zecora hears from Fluttershy about her dream that she ended up in a different world, inhabited not by Ponies, but by other creatures instead. Using her magic, Zecora learns that these creatures are Humans, and that Fluttershy will, un-doubtingly, meet a human. Shortly after, a mysterious storm comes, and only takes Fluttershy away, and she ends up in our Human world. Her only way back now is to befriend a human who can help her.

And that human is....ME?!

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Comments ( 14 )

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My good sir, if you plan for people to take you seriously, you're going to have to break your text up.
Use a new line for each piece of dialog (The enter key is your friend, learn to love him and he'll love you.)

Secondly, this is a self insert story
Do you hear that? It's the horrid of people sick and tired of self inserts and Ponies getting stuck outside of Equestria. If you plan to make it out in this world of FiM fanfiction you're going to have to get creative.

Think of an original story and roll with that. It also best to start by using Characters from the show with little or no OC's especially not a self insert on your first try.

That being said, keep trying, you learn from mistakes and you can only improve.

I'm sorry if I've said anything offend you, it's 3am and sleepy Nathan is the kind of guy who just doesn't give two shits about how he makes someone feel. Future Nathan will be back in the morning to check for any signs of improvements.

1084267>>1084267 calm down. Twilight is the leader in the FIM series. and please be nice. I'm new here.

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this is only the Prologue. besides, I just got started, and I'm new around here. this website is where people create their own story as they please, not as they're told. and as far as I'm concerned, this story, to me, IS original. you just need to give it time. that's all.

I've only written this, and the first 3 chapters are still written on my Microsoft Word. so I need some kindness, some politeness, and some "likes", or I won't put those other chapters up.

give me a chance, and give me some time.

this is MY story. so please let it be told.

1084048

this is only the Prologue. besides, I just got started, and I'm new around here. this website is where people create their own story as they please, not as they're told. and as far as I'm concerned, this story, to me, IS original. you just need to give it time. that's all.

I've only written this, and the first 3 chapters are still written on my Microsoft Word. so I need some kindness, some politeness, and some "likes", or I won't put those other chapters up.

give me a chance, and give me some time.

this is MY story. so please let it be told.1084048

also, you didn't offend me in any way, shape, or form. neither you, nor I are the first people to trod down that road.

Okay then, I'll go against my better judgment and put some faith in that you know what you're doing.
I've swapped my Dislike for a Like and I'll check back later to see how it's going.

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thanks. I need all the help, "likes", and support that I can get.

1093050 Likes means you post more of your story.
This idea makes me think of you as a like whore.
When I finally get around to publishing my story, I'll put up each chapter as I finish, not because I feel there are enough likes.
If you have the chapters you should just post them.

1206554 just wait until I upload Chapter 2. THEN tell me if that proves your point. :applejackunsure:

I haven't read this story yet... in fact I found it through a 'Image search' that pulled up your cover image. But you should totally continue and finish this regardless of the voting! Even if I down vote this later after reading(which I will tell you about) you should still finish it. Every story deserves to be finished!

Yes, this comment is inspired by the combination of the poor rating and the time elapsed since the last update. Every story deserves to be finished. The worst story ever written deserves to be finished, and don't let anybody ever tell you otherwise! I can not tell a lie!! Even my 'Worst Stories Ever Written' list deserves to be finished! And I absolutely hate those stories!

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I don't see how this could be one of those worst stories..., but I'll see what I can do; I just need to try to figure out the next chapter. That's all. Anyways, I disagree on this probably being the worse story, but I agree with you on the fact that it needs to be finished.

1934219 Um yeah, that was kind of ramblie wasn't it? I was pretty drunk at the time. I was just reacting to the fact that from the update log it looked like you might have abandoned the story because of bad ratings. That is sad, a story never getting finished. That's all I was trying to say. This is still in my 'Read Later' list for now, I still have 247 unread Chapters from stories I have already started to cover before I can start anything new.

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