The Obedient and Subservient Trixie

MMarmalade
MLP: FiM
Dark
Slice of Life
Porn
Twilight sticks her nose in Starlight's business for the last time
Sex
Non-con
Fetish
Profanity
Twilight
Trixie
Starlight Glimmer
LewdChapter · 2.2k words · 130 32 · 6.7k views

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Kulpa

Kulpa #1 · Nov 9th, 2019 · · 1 ·

Dis gon be gud, 🤤

I always enjoy your stories so I'm excited to read this one when I have the time.

superfun

superfun #2 · Nov 9th, 2019 · · 1 ·

Just as amazing as I was epecting

Kulpa

Kulpa #3 · Nov 9th, 2019 · · ·

Wish this was longer, but still a damn fine job given that it was a commission and bound to be limited to a word count.

RK_Striker_JK_5

RK_Striker_JK_5 #4 · Nov 10th, 2019 · 5 · 3 ·

Damned good ending for them both!

Herald of Opera

Herald of Opera #5 · Nov 10th, 2019 · 1 · ·

Both of the characters in this story are assholes, so I guess at least one of them got their comeuppance?

LewdChapter

LewdChapter #6 · Nov 10th, 2019 · · ·

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Such is the way of the LewdChapter

marinus18

marinus18 #7 · Nov 22nd, 2019 · · ·

Never cumming is quite excessive and actually not all that effective. She should be allowed to cum, just very, very rarely.

Also Starlight is extremely mean towards her friend. I mean I know clop stories are never perfectly in character but this is really pushing it.

LewdChapter

LewdChapter #8 · Nov 22nd, 2019 · · ·

9954986
These sorts of comments never cease to befuddle me.

The entire point is for her to be mean

marinus18

marinus18 #9 · Nov 22nd, 2019 · · ·

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I'm not saying that she shouldn't. But to make her completely evil like that feels excessive. Maybe a little more subtlety and restraint.

LewdChapter

LewdChapter #10 · Nov 22nd, 2019 · 3 · ·

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I genuinely can't tell if you're trolling or if you're just dumb enough to think that my readers or the person who paid for this story want subtlety and restraint in their one-shot mind control futa rape fetish fic.

There's a time and place for artistry and "proper" storytelling and characterization. This ain't that time nor that place.

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